"But in reality, the moment you hit puberty, you are already an adult." Sorry, I'm gonna have to argue with this statement. Although yes, maturity comes with experience and not age. However, don't expect a 13 year old that just hit puberty, who are at their most vulnerable state due to hormone changes, to have the capacity to make adult decision. Your brain is just starting to developed. You can not compare it to fully developed adult brain. On another note, I still have not read this webnovel yet.

Well, they are trope for a reason. It something that easier recognized and something that can attract readers. Otherwise, they wouldn't exist. So naturally, some author will take advantage of that, and there nothing wrong with that. Heck, even you probably have a trope you like. But no matter how interesting the trope or concept you have, it nothing if you can't develop an interesting plot or use the same formula seen about a thousand of times. It's boring, especially with the isekai genre.

Hm Idk. It was good that you're honest. But it feel like your more mad at the idea being recycled so many times rather than the novel itself.

It got me hook from the very first chapter and did quite some time until the free chapter and did a couple locked chapter as well. It was a very enjoyable read with a very engaging narrative, stable updates, and a very solid world build and it really seem that you know what you were doing. I think the first volume was engaging enough that it didn't seem that slow imo. However, now for the cons. The reason that made me less interesting in the story (mostly subjective). 1. MC entering the academy. It for me was kinda cringey and also cliche although it made sense why he did so and introducing the master and bonding with other character. It doesn't make it less cliche and cringey. 2. the mc flaws: his ability not to lie. It not a huge deal breaker for me. However, it did seem a bit forced that he will uncontrollably blurted out what he thinks. However, it still tolerable for me. 3. Required a master. Honestly, I rather he went solo and instead of having to be depend on someone and being bond to that person forever. Why? cuz I just like the freedom for Mc to explore the world and also haven't seen much quality in the potential master yet. 4. Total unrelated but I want to see some more male characters that I hope aren't the villain or one dimensional character. Nevertheless, I think still a pretty engaging story. Most of the cons were a lot of restrictions in the setting, his thought (can't lie), and required to have a master that give him less freedom,which was a bit off putting to me. Overall, I think you have a fantastic story going on and hope to see it develop.

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I'm not going to lie. I really enjoy it. A strong female protagnist (well also non-humanoid protagnist but hey still count) filled action and doesn't have a plot solve with the power of love. It was a refresher for sure and something that Webnovel female leads really need. However, that doesn't mean it was perfect (well from the last place I left off was 100 something). Other than writing quality and stability of update, I had a bit of a problem with the others. First, the side character was plain. They were just kind of there and didn't really add any substance as everything was just kind of handed to them on the silver plate as the mc was really overpowered. Not to mention, if I remember correctly , one of the side character was in coma for quite a while before woke up to be a bit overpowered. In short, even though the side character was part of mc "pack," they didn't play any role in the "pack". This also included the villain as they were also kinda shallow as well. But I did love the mc adventure and thought process for sure. But if you want this wolf "pack" to ever work. I need more character development and play an active role. Otherwise, all I see them as overhaul baggage.

I mean that not something really new when it comes to Webnovel. As long as you don't claim it as your own and put a disclaimer, then you're fine really.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Dude, not cool! The grammer part was valid but that remark on how they should stop writing was straight up rude.

Meh, doesn't matter

It's ironic to find someone criticizing an author for grammatical error when your review is just as bad.

So, wait, you're ten years old?!?!

Getting into the juicy stuff straight away. That caught me off guard.

That was um... unexpected

Very fancy

If you want, I can be your editor-ish. Though I don't have the best grammar, I do know some grammar rules to at least flow more easier.

... why did I read something that straight out of my biology notes. But good job either way, it was very informative.

Oh, you mean 1st POV.

Dude i understand how you feel but you got to stop nitpick at ever little detail. the more you nitpick, the more you going to hate everything you read and if you not going to enjoy the expience, why waste your time?

Not necessarily the system has complete control over his action, it mostly decide or generated task for not just the mc but for all players involve. Althoguh he may not have full control, considering the variable involve, he still have mastery over how he want to go out, which you can see in later chapter.