Story is definitely good and one of the few good Fate stories out there. It’s also very detailed and imaginative when I say that I mean like dragon ball kind of detail which I really like. Although I’ve noticed some very small minor mistakes when it comes to certain words and descriptions but that’s alright since those are just small things that can always be fixed via para comment. I also have to give some appreciation to author for how well developed he made Godrick with his origin story. I look forward to future chapters and eventually its completion hopefully.
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LIKEIt’s ok man I know that feeling when I used to write I would always be excited to post instead of just checking over my chapter.
greenbaypitbull:thank you so much!!! I really appreciate your review! I try my best to catch the spelling errors and other mistakes, but I get so excited about posting, and rush through my reading!thank you so much for your review!image