The Fateful Uchiha

Good Naruto story. Absolutely recommended. You can find a lot of Naruto Fanfic in this website, but few with rational story development. this story is the latter category

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Honestly I read this novel when it just had like 10 chapters and I would not put it in my top 10 Naruto Fanfics Novels, however I decided to re-read this whole novel and I can say with great certain that is on my top 3 Naruto Fanfic Novels of all time It his a story that builds up with the passage of time and gets u more and more invested in it as u read it. I start reading this novel at 10A.M. and didn't stopped till now, it's 23.52P.M. right now where I am. It was a great enjoyment that made my day The author builds the MC interactions with the world, the people and the effects that his actions have on the story with an almost perfect writing style that lets me the reader imagine the scenes of either the everyday day life and the fights that happen The fact that the author makes the MC invests in relationships and political power (it's not the focus I swear) helps me in actually imagining this as 'real world' with 'real consequences' Hands down one of the best Fanfics I've ever read on this App I'm truly truly thankful for all the hard work u have put in this novel Thx for all the chapters so far, moreeee Pls xD

The writting is really really good. Very few grammar mistakes. One of the rare stories where author actually knows how to write The mc is dumb really dumb he is an uchiha but won't learn genjutsu because he is not interested even though he needs every advantage to make sure his family survives He knows that his sister and family will die in future but rarely does more than the bare minimum to become strong Loses his motivation because his rival left him behind, even though he just had the biggest trauma of his life. The author is ruining the story by making the mc have -ive IQ

Overall, it's a good story with fewer if not no grammatical errors, a definite rarity on this site But, there are just a few things about some of the characters that I hate 1. I absolutely hate MC'S mother. after her husband's death, she has the genius idea of getting pumped by Hyuga Hiashi, which led to her pregnancy, so they decided to move out of the clan compound with no financial support, which in turn made her child's life miserable for two months. Yet the MC doesn't seem to even resent her for her irresponsibility, keep in mind that in order to get help for their financial situation, the MC need to beg a lot of people, as for Hiashi... THE DUDE JUST BAILED!! he doesn't help her because of his status as a Hyuga and her status as an Uchiha... But why he doesn't help her secretly? all he did was sends a bunch of toys for his son lol Nobody seems to question her action... NOBODY, the MC just ignored it, his mom doesn't regret it either lol Don't get me wrong I don't have a problem if she wants a fling or two... but with a fking Hyuga?!?! she must've been aware of the repercussions, yet she let her two kids, who are barely even a teenager takes care of her boyfriend kid And more infuriatingly, the Author still paint her as a good person, there just seems to be these ' good character' labels slapped onto her forehead in short, she is an irresponsible mother, who doesn't face her responsibility or seem to care about her child's well being 2. Sometimes I am annoyed by MC's lack of effort, but that's fine I'm still waiting for the 'character development' the Author promised.... yeah nope, it's already chapter 44 and a year or so from the Uchiha massacre, this is his second life and he needs to man up

The story is mediocre at best. Mc is too much of a coward, doing nothing but being paranoid of things that hadn't happened yet. He also doesn't use his time better like taking long term missions and use it to train his mangekyo sharingan and even his awakening of it was wriiten in a bad way. It felt forced especially since he didn't even use it for that much. He could've done so much more like saving shisui or even his father. So much plot holes that doesn't make sense. Shisui's death was my last straw and overall plunged the quality of the novel. Hope this gets a rewrite

I have no issues with the writing .. it's just Mc feels pathetic to me he doesn't have motivation which puts a huge dent to the story.. could have been great if Mc is motivated, but I'd still read it because the writing is good, hope mc develops some motivation. .. at ch 16

It's a good fanfic, only problem with this is there is too much monologing. Author go to YouTube a search "how to show not tell" it will help you improve your writing .

So I've been reading this for a while now I'm on chapter 27 or so and I feel like it's time I write a review on this firstly my issues with this is the main character and his family especially the mom like she's so unlikable you expect me to care for her but you made her so unlikeable that I'm hoping she dies when it should be the opposite she makes dumb decisions like I don't even Care that she had to leave the clan compound because she knew what she did was wrong and she hid it too and basically makes this dumb mc work extra hard to make money for the family even though he's technically just a child and all the bad things happening to them is due to her selfishness, now that I'm done with the mom let's talk about our idiot main character sure he doesn't know all the clues and stuff and doesn't remember everything from Naruto but he knows that the clan will be killed off in a couple of years yet he barely works hard to protect the so-called family that he likes his will is so weak like one little thing can happen and it'll change his whole mood to where he'll stop training for a long time he's so weak. It's not even funny without the mangekyo Sharingan he'd probably be at the level of iruka you made him so dumb and reading the story felt kind of off-putting for some reason like it doesn't feel like Naruto it feels more like an American drama show and it gets more obvious when I keep on reading this just doesn't feel right but overall it's okay if you're into these kinds of stories the writing quality is good and updates are frequent character development is beyond atrocious character design is bland World background is pretty good overall ill still probably keep on reading this I don't enjoy it

Mc is the stupidest reincarnator ever, period. Worse, he think he is smart and good person while judging everyone around him when he himself act like a monkey with room temperature IQ. Imagine, trying to forgive uchiha after they killed his mother, trying to reason with itachi to not kill his sister or trying to infrom hokage when itachi massacre the clan and being suprise pikachu face when he cant find a single anbu to help him......The only reason he survive is the plot armor Mangekyou sharingan he received while having two tomoe sharingan (how logical) for a single traumatic event thats barely enough to open single tomoe for normal people. What a waste of time.

pretty good fantic, but author like to give mc tragedy like kaneki, unfortunately its pretty fast pace story and difficult to connect to the character that died, there is no motivation for mc to become stronger, other than feeling Threatened by itachi. mc like to make plan, but did not have plan to kill danzo, obito, madara, zatsu, kaguya, it did not resonate with fanfic reader, so far author just want mc to cower on the side and crying..

I read to Ch6 and the story isn't too bad, It just has a lot of little things that rub me wrong. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

Be prepared for a weak-willed MC who has no intention of changing canon events or taking advantage of past-life knowledge. It's honestly impressive how pathetic the MC is. He doesn't change anything until chapter 51 and even then it's minor. And yet even with all these complaints I'm still somehow invested in this and keep reading. The author knows black magic.

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well let me say this first, your writing is really amazing i specially liked the events you portrayed during the nine tails event night it was thrilling it was sad it was perfect everything was great.. But even to get to that part i had to endure a lot like a lot lot now let me tell you the issues i found about the MC and why it didn't made sense. First of all, i get it that he isn't the usual reincarnated mc, he got fragments of his previous life when he was born and after a few years he got clearity that much was clear, i ignored the part where he didn't remember izumi granted he might have lost those parts of memory or js forgotten since its been a while he has seen the series or simply he didnt remember those things are ok. But when he got clearity about his memory that those memories are actually real and those events are going to happen then ( it was sure those memories were real deal after the third shinobi war) the mc since he is a kid as portrayed by the author, should have panicked or worked hard to change the future or during the kyubi night just alarm your parents a few hours early just made up excuses since you are a kid i am pretty sure no normal kid would stay calm knowing a nuke carrier is gonna come just outside their house. But i got the general idea you needed the father dead otherwise the mc would have stayed super weak( he is still weak since he doesn't practice and all, all he does is reading books about history in library). The story doesn't make sense either you make the mc a reincarnator who doesn't care about his current family or just make him unable to remember anything or make him see glimpses of uncertainty into the future.. but no you made him a kid you gave him all memories and made him act so weirdly which is completely unrealistic any kid would freak out or try hard to change the outcome but all your mc does is cry and say weird stuff while doing nothing

Very good Fic. Just stumbled upon it yesterday and devoured it whole. Don't know how I could miss this amazing thing this long.... Anyways... Thanks for your efforts Author-san. Please continue to do so 🥺😃

the Mc is an idiot with an ocd! his over thinking destroys all the intrest that one can build . the writing quality is good just the Mc screwed the story, like if he was so paranoid about itachi killing the Uchiha clan might as well just kill him when he is small baby.total waste of potential and good writing quality

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The mc is dumb ................................................................ ................................................................

Got to chap 5 too much summary writing not story telling boring headache to read. Shame could be good but a list of events is not really interesting especially at the beginning of a fanfic. Makes it dull and hard to read past. Character interactions, dialogue there ain't none so I stop caring about the MC or his family or anything in the story. I cannot get immersed in a character if it's just a list of thinking