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hero4hireLv111yr
2023-12-05 11:24

Mc is the stupidest reincarnator ever, period. Worse, he think he is smart and good person while judging everyone around him when he himself act like a monkey with room temperature IQ. Imagine, trying to forgive uchiha after they killed his mother, trying to reason with itachi to not kill his sister or trying to infrom hokage when itachi massacre the clan and being suprise pikachu face when he cant find a single anbu to help him......The only reason he survive is the plot armor Mangekyou sharingan he received while having two tomoe sharingan (how logical) for a single traumatic event thats barely enough to open single tomoe for normal people. What a waste of time.

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Ur_Mom_Gay
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Overall, it's a good story with fewer if not no grammatical errors, a definite rarity on this site But, there are just a few things about some of the characters that I hate 1. I absolutely hate MC'S mother. after her husband's death, she has the genius idea of getting pumped by Hyuga Hiashi, which led to her pregnancy, so they decided to move out of the clan compound with no financial support, which in turn made her child's life miserable for two months. Yet the MC doesn't seem to even resent her for her irresponsibility, keep in mind that in order to get help for their financial situation, the MC need to beg a lot of people, as for Hiashi... THE DUDE JUST BAILED!! he doesn't help her because of his status as a Hyuga and her status as an Uchiha... But why he doesn't help her secretly? all he did was sends a bunch of toys for his son lol Nobody seems to question her action... NOBODY, the MC just ignored it, his mom doesn't regret it either lol Don't get me wrong I don't have a problem if she wants a fling or two... but with a fking Hyuga?!?! she must've been aware of the repercussions, yet she let her two kids, who are barely even a teenager takes care of her boyfriend kid And more infuriatingly, the Author still paint her as a good person, there just seems to be these ' good character' labels slapped onto her forehead in short, she is an irresponsible mother, who doesn't face her responsibility or seem to care about her child's well being 2. Sometimes I am annoyed by MC's lack of effort, but that's fine I'm still waiting for the 'character development' the Author promised.... yeah nope, it's already chapter 44 and a year or so from the Uchiha massacre, this is his second life and he needs to man up

finalgetsuga
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So I've been reading this for a while now I'm on chapter 27 or so and I feel like it's time I write a review on this firstly my issues with this is the main character and his family especially the mom like she's so unlikable you expect me to care for her but you made her so unlikeable that I'm hoping she dies when it should be the opposite she makes dumb decisions like I don't even Care that she had to leave the clan compound because she knew what she did was wrong and she hid it too and basically makes this dumb mc work extra hard to make money for the family even though he's technically just a child and all the bad things happening to them is due to her selfishness, now that I'm done with the mom let's talk about our idiot main character sure he doesn't know all the clues and stuff and doesn't remember everything from Naruto but he knows that the clan will be killed off in a couple of years yet he barely works hard to protect the so-called family that he likes his will is so weak like one little thing can happen and it'll change his whole mood to where he'll stop training for a long time he's so weak. It's not even funny without the mangekyo Sharingan he'd probably be at the level of iruka you made him so dumb and reading the story felt kind of off-putting for some reason like it doesn't feel like Naruto it feels more like an American drama show and it gets more obvious when I keep on reading this just doesn't feel right but overall it's okay if you're into these kinds of stories the writing quality is good and updates are frequent character development is beyond atrocious character design is bland World background is pretty good overall ill still probably keep on reading this I don't enjoy it

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