Scarlette Overland

A story of a strong (apparently also famous) female adventurer who seems to be a bit of a workaholic hahaha. Anyway, so what about the crusty crispy? Stability of updates... no complains xD Story development, it looks good so far, but that pace can be hard to maintain sometimes. So careful with it. Character Design. Hum, I'm having a bit of an issue with that. I think it's because they look too anime-like to me (and I like animes). W. Background. I do not allow myself to judge that until I reach around chapter 50 of a story. So I'll give you the benefice of the doubt because it looks okay so far, five stars. Writing quality. That's where I had the most issue with. There are grammar issues peppered throughout the chaps that can sometimes hinder the readability. Also an abuse of "The" to start your sentences. Be wary of that. Anyway, keep up the good work author

Great fantasy pick. The story is about our mysterious capable SSS rank adventure mc who is famous for being independent throughout the empire. But one day she mets this guy Ryan who doesn't know how capable she is. He loves to poke his nose in other people's businesses and same way he asks mc if he could join her on mission. With mc's agreement their journey of adventure begins with mc's past following her throughout her journey with this strange guy. Writing Quality - It's good, grammarly might help you further. but overall it was great. Story development - It kind of feels slow at start but it's need for world building and to give readers the time to get absorbed in the story world. Character design - The mc is mysterious yet she has a human side. Ryan feels like a open book but there is a possibility of seeing more depth of his character. World background - It resemble the normal fantasy adventure guide type setting but of high quality. The efforts author put into world building is visible. Will I recommend this? Yeah, it has fantasy, mystery, capable female lead, funny ml. It's good read for people who loves this genre. It kind of gives the feel that it can satisfy both male female audience but I will still think of it as female leading. Keep up good work author 😊👍.

Another shameless review! ^_^ Finally, I have finished editing chapters 1-29! I can now focus on creating new chapters! I hope that everyone would still wait for my novel updates! ^_^ There are changes in the scenario that happens compared to before and also added some information, I guess? Hihi! ^_^ Keep on reading everyone! ^_^ Thank you so much for taking your time to read and review my novel! ^_^

This air of mystery shrouding the MC has feels just too great. The story is well-written and the plot is interesting Although there are grammatical mistakes, they can be improved with the time. As they say 'Practice makes the man perfect'. But no doubt, this story has great potential.

First chapter was hooking. the kind of novel that pulls readers in. Didn't sense romance yet, so not sure about the chemistry. but so far it has been real good. the writing style is also consistent and reliable.

The story is really great and I'm glad I gave it a try, it was just like I imagined it, I love the action and the twists. Amazing storyline well-done author keep up the good I enjoyed it.

Hi! I love the story! It's rare to read a story that a woman is strong and amazing. I like that she's mysterious and cool! Keep up the good work, author!

It was entertaining and I enjoyed it! The writing quality is good. The conversations and descriptions were amusing. The way the story is developed is intriguing. I would say that the character design is awesome. The world background is interesting and creative. It was a good read for me. Of course, I had already added this to my library and will continue to read more. Overall, THIS IS GREAT! Dear author, you're amazing! Keep up the good work! I wish you the best of luck!

I always believe that female lead novels shouldn't show ladies as weak and easily swayed by their hearts. Instead they should show the strength in each woman and emphasize on that. Women aren't weak, in fact I know as a doctor that women can tolerate much pain than men. They also face a lot of challenges compared to any man. Life isn't fair to girls, and in return that makes any girl a force that you can't toy with. I strongly support your work and hopefully more like this would emerge. Highly recommended novel, and I'm pretty sure it will suit the taste of any reader. Thanks for writing this piece of art.

Wow. What a story! Such an intriguing plot, even if this is not my piece of cake. I love the author's style and enjoyed the novel so far. Keep up the good work and never stop believing! :D

Hello dear author. I will be very honest with you. Your story has so much potential. However, you are making your sentences way too long. A whole paragraph with no full stops. Please be mindful of punctuation marks as well as tenses. If you can edit that, I'm sure your story is a very interesting one.

I enjoyed reading this story, it's really good so far and the premise is very interesting. I already added it to my library and I plan to read all of it when I get the chance. Some of the grammar is out of place, but it still intrigues me nonetheless. The last thing I want to say is that what I've read is amazing so far and I look forward to reading more in the future. Thank you, author!!

I guess the first few chapters too wordy ? Readers not dumb as you think, take that in mind. You don't have to repeat what the characters are thinking, just make sure it's understandable for readers .

I will give my honest opinion. I found the novel interesting, but I would like to give constructive criticism to the author. Your synopsis is too big, try to make it smaller so that people only have a small sense of the story, remember that many people don't like to read synopsis and rely too much on the tags and titles of the novel, if your synopsis is too big less people can read. Altogether it is an excellent novel. I hope the author continues to make an effort.

I was hooked from the first chapter itself. The mystery in the atmosphere is contagious. I liked the overall plot of the novel, and story is also well written. There are some errors here and there but it's not a big deal as it will be solved through editing. I liked the MC and the way it's written. And keep up the good work :)

From the synopsis you can just tell this is going to be a great read and sure enough the author doesn't disappoint. The story is truly intriguing and the author's style of writing is understandable. Keep it up author 👍

I love the mysterious vibe that you give this novel with your writing! I can tell this story is full of adventure just waiting to happen. And I totally understand the whole grammarly situation, I use it to edit as well ♡ A couple minor mistakes is okay, the story is enjoyable and that's all that matters!!! Great job!

The story is great and I can say that for this author. I saw that there is a transmigration and reincarnation tag but the story didn't tell it yet so I am looking forward for this novel ❤️❤️

Okay, I'll be leaving an honest review NOT FOR DISCOURAGING YOU OF just pointing out some pros and cons: The first chapter is what i paid the most attention to. There seem to be a lot of grammatical and punctuation errors, so I suggest you review and edit your chaps once again! (especially the first chap since it draws in readers.) Overall, the synopsis is pretty good and the story looks catchy. Just some editing is all you need.

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