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my MGS is about to start so you can expect at least one chapter everyday

The author's has great story line and an amazing way of building in it up. By incorporating humor and paranormal elements, they have been able to come up with a new exciting world for readers. The story is super refreshing and comical and I think it's worth keeping. Good job author 👏💜

The storyline is the strongest point in this novel, the author has a well laid out background that makes the story have a good foundation. I would only comment on the grammar which needs a little polishing but that is not a problem. With just a little editing the book will be an amazing read. Keep it up author

After reading the first few chapters, it is already clear who descriptive the author's style is. The storyline has a lot of promise and the vivid way in which the author builds it is just phenomenal. The only problem is that the language needs some polishing but all in all the book is an amazing read.

One of the author's strong points is how realistic the characters are, honestly if I meet Ryu on some street I would marry him. The description of the world the author is building is also interesting and easily grasped. This is a book worth keeping.

oh no!! This sounds like a prophecy, characters you are doomed🙃

The prologue was the most intriguing part and the creativity behind it calls for the readers attention and clings to it. The bits and pieces of mystery that the author gives out in the next chapters are enough bait for readers to continue. The writing style is also very stable and the dose of mystic, the author gives to the characters is refreshing. I'll keep this awesome book and see where it goes

okay, twist🧐