Light_Breeze

Appreciate your support! I am currently working on my other novel more . [Return of the vengeful heiress]. After a few more chapters on that work I will resume this one. Hope you could be patient :)

that's gross af, ew🤢

agreed!!!!

I hope he was reborn toooo

😭😭tf???? my ocd would kill me then and there

is the sister in the room with us?

They are 13!!!! what's with aggrieved wife???

Love the descriptive writing. If you have been reading his past works you would know for sure that the writing quality took a leap in terms of improvement. There are a few issues with the past and present tenses. I am guessing the writer wants to give off a more poetic vibe by writing the description in present tense at the cost of being grammatically incorrect. The pace is pretty good given you don't get the white room syndrome. There are enough description but not so much that you lose tract of the storyline. Just enough to keep the reading immersive

🤣🤣So he was the one who invented covid vaccine?

darn, the opening!