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Supersam362

Supersam362

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2020-03-05 入りましたGlobal
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15.7h

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6

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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    I really like the character's, they're well written and the interactions are interesting. Although there's a little too much gore for my taste. There's only a few chapters so far, but I can tell this story has potential. Keep up the good work

    The Devil Under The Name Of God
    ファンタジー · 1AM
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    The writing quality of the book is very well developed. I really enjoyed the somber undertone the story gave, reminiscent of the grim dark fantasy genre. The development is fantastic and I can't wait for more, keep up the updates author

    Droppedhhh
    ファンタジー · ScarletCore
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    コメント

    No, I plan to pick it up at some point. I'm getting ready for college, so writing isn't my biggest priority at the moment. Although, I really would like to keep going with it soon.

    Ch 46 Infiltrated
    The Paladin Order Reformed
    ファンタジー · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    The begining is slow, but when you think it's going to normal, it sprinkles a little bit of foreshadowing to keep you interested. The writing is really well done and the descriptions are great. I can't wait to see what will happen! Good job author!

    Izuka
    ファンタジー · Anotoki
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    I enjoyed reading this story, it's really good so far and the premise is very interesting. I already added it to my library and I plan to read all of it when I get the chance. Some of the grammar is out of place, but it still intrigues me nonetheless. The last thing I want to say is that what I've read is amazing so far and I look forward to reading more in the future. Thank you, author!!

    Scarlette Overland
    ファンタジー · empressblackrose09
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    に返信 Slan

    Yeah, he is.

    Ch 4 Mutual Understanding
    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    アニメ·コミックス · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    に返信 LPummill3

    A little creative liberty, I like to think receiving a god's power for the first time would hurt. Although, I could be wrong.

    この段落は削除されました。
    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    アニメ·コミックス · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    コメント

    Wow, I really like the start of this!!

    Ch 1 The Woman In Black Hooded Cloak
    Scarlette Overland
    ファンタジー · empressblackrose09
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    The story has a really good premise and I like how the world building is done over time. There are a few mistakes, but I don't think anyone wants people to critique their first work too seriously. Good job author and keep up the updates!

    Cycle Of Nirvana
    ファンタジー · Uragos
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    The story is really well written, it's captivating and easy to read. The only thing I can comment on is the lack of comma's where there needs to be some. Other than that the story is really well written and I enjoyed it thoroughly.

    The Isle of Guardians
    ファンタジー · d_nmalory
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    I like they way the story starts off, it's mysterious and intriguing. I will say the jumping from different view points at the beginning did throw me off slightly, but that's a minor personal preference. Good job author, keep it up!

    Snow Flames
    現実 · The_Paintrogrammer
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    に返信 empressblackrose09

    Thank you for your support! I actually have an original novel, it's 47 chapters and a fantasy novel. I started it last year, so I can't say the quality is better, but if you want to help support my original works, then I'd really recommend reading my other novel. It's called the Paladin Order Reformed

    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    アニメ·コミックス · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    I found the story pretty interesting, the only thing I had issue with was understanding the setting at first. I was able to understand with context clues. This is just a small critique and I found the over all story pretty good. Keep writing author

    The Wings Home
    ファンタジー · inklingparker
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    I don't usually give 5 stars, but I truly believe this novel deserves it. I don't know if the story is modeled after the manga Re:Monster (an amazing fantasy manga if you're looking for one), but it closely resembles it in several aspects. The goblin pov, leveling up through consuming enemies, etc. While there are many similarities, I would be hesitant to say it's the same. The story is extremely well written and very interesting to read. I had no problem staying invested and made sure to add this story to my library. I will conclude with a heartfelt congratulation, this is very good and I encourage you to continue writing.

    Re: Monster King
    ファンタジー · UNK
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    に返信 UNK

    🤔 maybe you're right, who knows?

    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    アニメ·コミックス · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    This story is pretty unique in it's application. While there are quite a few stories about being reincarnated into a game, few of them really go into depth about the game. The character's instruction was well done, the only problem I could find was with the editing of some of the story. You're doing great author, keep it up!

    I was a Nerfed Hero in Another World
    ファンタジー · kuhaku_sora
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    に返信 Kandpalbhaskar010

    Thank you, I'll try and make it a story worth your interest

    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    アニメ·コミックス · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    に返信 UNK

    Really? What character 😂?

    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    アニメ·コミックス · Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    Interesting writing style. I can't say that battle royals themselves are unique, but this story definitely is!! I really enjoy how the character's interact with each other's it's really enjoyable and funny to whiteness. I really like this so far and would recommend to anyone wanting an epic victory royal (sorry, had to lol)

    Welcome To Terminus
    ゲーム · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    発表

    First off, really good story. The character's are introduced well and their interactions are fun and enjoyable to read. The world building is unique and really fleshes out the setting. I enjoyed the writing style, even if there were a few errors. This is an awesome story and I'm happy to give it it's 10th review. Great job author and keep up the good work.

    Forsaken's Redemption
    SF · ariam_N_M
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