Reincarnated as an Archangel in the Omniverse

I thought it was good because of the touching prologue at the start, but then the MC gets killed by his sister cliched style followed by him meeting Superman God. So I read the rest and recognized a pattern. You can check the author's works, he has good updating stability but his stories lack substance, full of plot holes, changing personality of the MC, cliche scenarios, etc. I thought he would improve from his previous works but it's all the same. It's a good wishfullfilment but that's it overall. The MC basically bros with Superman God but is actually working for him, anyways it's a wishfullfilment in a predictable storyline that the author slightly altered by adding extra tidbits like turning the OG main character a girl. (Bell from Danmachi to Bella) It follows an overpowered MC that can hunt at 3 years old, talk perfectly and none of the world's inhabitants are the wiser to point it out. Not my cup of tea, but good for wasting time if you turn off your brains.

Archangel Mael was tragic Character in SDS, was Original owner of Sunshine. Let see MC can do justice to his name. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

the incongruity of his age to his actions and specially the reactions of the people around him is what held this fic back for me. people might think it's a minor thing but when it doesn't affect perceptions of the characters when it's supposed to be, then there's something wrong with it. I read your previous fics and relatively enjoyed it, but somehow because of that detail it affects everything in the story...

This is a basic power fantasy / wish fulfillment story. I probably would have enjoyed this story if the main character wasn't a three year old who acted like an adult. It would have been better if the MC was inserted when Grandpa left and the body he was put in acted how the MC would have acted if he was reincarnated without memories but with his personality so nobody would notice any changes. Honestly one of my biggest hang ups for stories are the childhood arcs, most fanfic writers don't make them well. People seem to forget children are children not mini-adults. Also a head injury on a three year old that changes their personality should be a bigger deal then " oh you became more mature because of that fall ". In a world like Danmachi a swift personality change should be a huge cause for concern.

It's just one those cliche harem gathering novels, guy travels to different worlds, gathers whatever females he likes. It's like a traveling circus of different breeds of animals, It decently written, not too many errors at all. but it has no substance, nothing new to appeal to, every girl falls for the mc, even a few after a moment of meeting each other are already flirting for no reason. It is after all a wish fulfilment story, of course it will be nonsensical at times, but the way it is done is not really satisfying to read. He never mentions to his zoo of women, that he has others in different worlds, the constant lying, showing off whenever possible has its turn offs. It becomes harder to read the more you read.

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It's meh. But alot of cliché, The Mc doesn't use his head in a fight, I know he is op but killing a weak enemy with a city destroying attack is d*mb. And let's not forget he is acting like a grown man at 3 years old but the people around him don't find it weird (He literally went out hunting animals at 3 years and no one questioned it). I don't think the author was thinking when he wrote this.

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So far it's going to be another banger but it has a few problems with timeline in the first world(could say because it's a au that's why) and the second problem is Mc's age doesn't makes sense if he is around the same age as lily in pre time skip he should between 7 to 10.

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It reminded me of that fanfic where even at chapter 350 the main character was still a child of 6 years old, like at the beginning. Absolutely rubbish idea to write from the point of view of a child with adult thinking. I wonder what drives the minds of such authors? Why make the main character a child, with adult thinking, this is not Family Guy dude.

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I can't say I liked it, but at least it entertained me. It's a generic Wish Fulfillment with a lot of characters from different multiverses, those who like stories like that might like it. Personally, I hate the Gender Bender and I didn't really like the development of the story. But objectively speaking, it could be said that it is good.

The idea is good but the writing quality and development of the story is bad. H

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Well... I don't even remember if I reviewed the other two books but I'm reviewing this one anyway. If my current opinion and view changes during the book I'll make another review or just make a 1 Star review. Please note that this is based on the two previous books and the current one. with the Second book being a guideline since both previous works show how the author improved. 1-Writing Quality: There are little to no grammar mistakes and typing errors but there still are some, it's nothing major just something here and there really. On previous works sometimes the author would mistake she and he so yeah there's that. [4 Stars] 2-Story Development: The story had a great first chapter and it was nice to see that it started great. But like I said on the chapter the first chapter feels more like a prologue instead of an official first chapter due to it being like and intro to the book, or an origin thing. Don't know how to say it. [4 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: Honestly so far he's great like dayum you need to read the first chapter. He's not a pushover, he takes no Cr*ps from the people in the book and is caring and driven. But then comes a dominant factor and the author's preference so far. The MC's are usually how do I say this... they tend to let things their partners do or screw ups slide. Basically their simps for their partners, don't get me wrong a there's an acceptable doce of letting things slide but so far both previous MC's let EVERYTHING slide, they weren't p*ssies or subs but they where whipped. The other characters are well made and detailed with great backstories. [4 Stars Here, for the Whipped MC's] 4-Updating Stability: The book just started so can't talk about that but on previous works the updates where constant, it wasn't always daily but they followed a schedule and if the author wouldn't be able to post he informed us in advance. [5 Stars Here for commitment with all us whinny and b*tchy readers😂] 5-World Background: If there is one thing you can't complain on the author's stories is the world building and background details. The scene is detailed, the backstory of the characters, locations and events are detailed. This is one of the best things of the author's stories. He knows his stuff and he researches it so he can inform but not let it become an info dump. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 4.4 My Opinion: I recommend reading at least the first chapter and if you're not hooked and wanting more than I can safely say that we do not see eye to eye and that's okay.

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I enjoyed it and I don't know why people are complaining; this novel is better than most. The only complaint I have is that the main character is naive.

could we get more please really good story

Good start while there are some details that needs to be ignored for a better immersion everything else is quite right. That is until mid 40's, not really fan of harem but since it has a good start i did give it a try. But then again until chapter mid 40's, everything snowballed into something cannot be defined. Still good job for the work though, i really like the idea of being able to jump back and forth into his previous world. Just for my suggestion, please limit the chickens. I guess 5 would do but if you can lower to 1 heroine, much better.