Carlos_Ribeiro_4380

(translated by Google) At first I thought the story was cool, after all I had never seen a crossover between Winx and Ben 10, but over time I realized that this story has some problems that are really annoying. 1. the story update is very slow (once a week) although the chapter is big it's not worth it. 2. In addition to the update being slow, it is a chapter full of useless things, for example: There are about 3 chapters where it's just the guy absorbing power and wanting to demonstrate how incredible he is, or there's a chapter with an incredibly useless fight if there's a fight 😂😂

I was going to give this novel a chance, but after seeing this first chapter, I'm about to give up. The guy simply has the power to summon powerful beings as servants but who literally have no loyalty to him, simply ridiculous. (Google translator)

dear and magnificent author I really hope that now everyone dies and that they are not saved by anyone because this same thing is getting boring all the time, please (Google tradutor)

the funny thing is this is very goku from dbs

(Google translator) brother he is a bloodbending user wish it were easy?

(Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿 (Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿 (Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿

(Google translator) at first I thought this skill was cool but after this chapter I realized that it is very op and it will make the story very boring ideas to nerf her: 1-the mc will feel his pride hurt since he is practically mind controlling the girls to sleep with him so he will limit the use 2-sell or exchange this skill for some other, a perfect example would be him entering the dungeon thinking he is too strong and should advance further, so he enters a life or death situation and then trades that skill in exchange for a strength increase or something else to get out alive

(Google translator) how about he go to the world of Disney fairy tales since that would be something no one does, not to mention catching the princesses, the villains, destroying kingdoms...

(Google translator) How about Tiffany (actress Jennifer Tilly) from Chucky Killer Toy

(Google translator) OK? this chapter was boring half of it was telling the story of omni-man and a part telling the ability of mercury and superman but take my power stones anyway