Reborn in the Narutoverse

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Dropped after reading chap 20. My reaction was like wtf? He’s still a low level chunin with all of his shits? Also when he gave out his cooking techniques he oly asked for 5% of the income but now it says that he cant craft **** because doesn’t have materials because he’s too fucking broke?!? Like wtf? He invented the technique and his parents doesn't give him any. They know that he is a fucking genius but they doesn't support him and ****?!? I know that your slowing down the progress, but at least give us a reason why he doesn't have enough money and isn't a sage by now and etc. really a bad chapter and bad progress so far. Doubting if I will continue reading further.

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Love the novel, would recommend it to all Naruto lovers. The MC has a new bloodline, which is pretty cool and also a system. But not to over-powered. The MC also has new Doujutsu with different powers. Only 2 chapters have been released till. But looking forward to more.

This is frustating to read......... I saw some a lot of goodie mc but not this much. This mc is annoying as ****.......hes giving free for everthing and he thinks hes a genius....... Wth. Can i masturbate and shoot into the tree does that MEAN im a genius too?? AUTHOR WANTS TO BE A GOOD PERSON SO MUCH BUT IM SURE IN REAL LIFE YOUR JUST PIECE OF SHIT...... IM WONDERING WHY LOT OF PEOPLE GIVING THESE 5 STARS... MAYBE THE AUTHOR CREAT NEW ACCOUNTS JUST TO RATE HIS NOVEL??

Story is terrible it had a great concept and could have been great. Author made him to op to fast. I dont mind op mcs but they had him being op from the start. If you make a story reimcarnation it has to be logical i cant read about a 1 yr old genius mc who reinvents a cultivation technique and everyone is fine with it. In my opinion there is much better stuff to do then waste your time reading this shi t.

Started off ok....then author decides to use crap from naruto fillers and those cringe naruto movies. Author likes trash apparently -----------------------------------------------------------------------

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1 million views !!! if I were Masashi Kishimoto would be calling my lawyer now ........................................................................................................................................................................

At first I really enjoyed this novel because it was unique and stuff with the new bloodline and dojutsu but then it turned into "let's change the story of naruto but show him with someone else's perspective" Really disappointing

The story is extremely promising. It has good background, an OP MC and I love how he is able to blend in well to the Naruto Universe storyline. I truly do enjoy the novel and how it is developing. Having said that, however... the enjoyment is marred by the quality of the writing. It isn't the grammar - though there are some errors, it is negligible. What makes it a pain is that the author tends to have has a extremely long sentences. It is like a person who is telling you their life story in one breath. Breaking it down to several sentences would make it much easier to read and more enjoyable. One would not then need to , slow down and re-read some sentences just to understand them. You CAN have a long sentence but not when it looks like a whole mass of words and ideas joined together.

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A really great novel. Probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read. I really like the direction this story is progressing. Keep up the great work and see it to the end.

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Overall I can say with satisfaction that this novel rocks!!!!. The character development, MC's near perfect blending with the background of the original story is pretty awesome. The best thing about the story is that it didn't just turn out to be a run of the mill harem were the MC is a total ***aholic, who steals all the girls. Rather the writer created his own love life. Really excited to see were this story goes.

you get shameless 5 stars cause this looks good might be spoilers to other fanfic naruto world item 1 it looks like this is going to involve politics if you make it look too easy make sure there are plenty of conflict in the politics to solve think of story board for stuff like that like him trying to solve the conflict of the uchiha or money making schemes or danzo and the council causing a mess you can remake the school system or find ways to get rid of greedy bissness men corrupt officials or stupid civilian council ( no bulling naruto ) and him making connections to class and on the note of naruto you can try to get rid of the hate on him on in early age help train him as i said earlier upgrade the school or the government stores also try your hand at upgading economy and introduce new technology and try to fake some deaths here and there hey they did it to sasuka at the naruto bridge for some nice emotional stuff and also try to upgade his clan and establish connections to make it bigger or make problems with the artifact of their clan since too many are using it and it is runing dry and he helps fix it also read other naruto fanfic Naruto world reincarnation for ideas on how to make a proper jutsu creation Noah fastest ninja alive- a naruto fanfiction for i don't kow adding elements that were not in original works though good idea try your hand at hidden clans and people across the world or his dragon budy attracts problems there is the whole space thing that way you can exspand you can along the way unite the hidden villeges and introduce new goverment In Anime World you can steal his ideas of mastery stuff In Naruto World With Instant Mastery Cheat and generic fan fiction for that if you want that in there (p.s. ***) God Of Ice In Naruto World Reborn as a Supernatural in Naruto's World! also nice touch if you add a berserk skill or a type of limit break star related Rebirth: Living as Naruto Genius Reborn in Naruto World with System you really need to read this one he gets rid of greedy council making money upgrades the school and uses money village uses money to search through villages and gets more students this students have talent find different kakai genkia and other villages do the same therefore more rivals for mc mc also tries to get the uzumakie clan to come back NARUTO SAGA theres also that one you can try to do what they did in this one with soul energy exe**t star energy and food introduce all new food into this era The Strongest Shinobi and one of the you have too do so SHINOBI: The RPG some how after giving this guy every blood line and space and nukes he still does op right you also can study the sealing arts like he did on this one to make technology or stuff that similar sealing arts was not that talked about in the series"guns" so make it puddy in your hands you can also make him a jack of all trades so he can do almost anything mamking his learning very hard since you made him op at the age of 4 Born as a Sage in Naruto World , Escape from the Hokage's Hat one of if not he best fanfics seems totally believable and gets very deep into seals on naruto stopping his growth and thus smarter naruto and make huge chacra not seem so op ,you can do so my remembering battle experience even if you are stronger than your oponite they will get the better of you if they are smarter and more experience you can also add blood lust to this you can also read other stuff to see how to do fight senes right just try to describe even the littlest detile if your not good you can also make a group of the younger kids and make a study group to make them stronger and makes a lot of friends temporary injury to make him weaker make him not use full power to make a better fondation for his skills like his chakra is overloading his body cannot handle it or his mind is stronger than his body making chakra control hard or practicing jutsu and hurts his body cannot use full power or he needs to focus in tajutsu or kenjutsu or he goes all lone wolf because he is op and gets hurt fighting everyone try to make him use team work like i said erlyier you need to make something drive this guy he has a bloodline right when orochimaru tries to attack his clan members die and his grandfather dies protecting him fueling his need to gain power also try to make solid selaetion ships so far we the reader have no emotional investment in his familiy like would we care if they died all the bonding the screentime has shown us is that orphan now family yay i need more depth than that if you run out of ideas based on this cheak my similar rants to born as a sage in naruto an the last page it has similar stuff there it may give you ideas if you got writers block

Undeserved reviews, most 5 stars are put by bots, and so the novel deserves 3.5 stars, but because of the bots I will put 1 star ..................

I am sooo glad that this novel is back.... Please update it more frequently.!! And DO NOT drop this heaven defying piece of art.!! . Damn this whole 140 word thing.... Hmm Let me think.. I get an erection every time I read it.??

I would like to first put out that I love the fact that you are taking your time and trying to develop the plot and background information. But if you have more releases a week I would have given you a 5 star. Also your grammar is fairly good and I never see spelling mistakes. I hope you keep up the good work and wish you good luck.

Good luck with the novel love it.