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Roktah
RoktahLv156yr
2018-09-05 19:51

the concept of the story is quite good and intriguing but that all falls apart quite fast. The mc apparently used to be buddha in his past life bc he gives away everything he owns including secrets for free. s,ss,sss techniques, knowledge, special refined equip that he produces are given away like they are cabbage. Its honestly frustrating to read imagine library of the heavens path and the whole of konoha being his students: you want it? here it means nothing to me. huh? you want the most powerful technique in the universe? here you go. you want to know every secret and abilities of my doujutsu? ok.

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Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5

Español: Todo lo que hace en ese momento es para recibir un mayor Karma para su dojutsu, ademas de que el prácticamente no pierde nada al compartir esas técnicas, ademas de que son técnicas simples(para el) y el puede conseguir mas adelante mejores y no te olvides de que su clan necesita protección y el es demasiado débil en ese momento, que pasaría si el hokage lo toma como una amenaza por lo intrigante que es al tener esa edad, puede eliminar todo su clan y que gana con eso, una bullshit. Ingles: Everything he does at that moment is to receive more Karma for his dojutsu, besides that he practically loses nothing by sharing those techniques, besides they are simple techniques (for him) and he can get better later and not forget that his clan needs protection and he is too weak at that moment, what would happen if the hokage takes him as a threat because of how intriguing he is at that age, he can eliminate all his clan and he wins with that, a bullshit.

Ashwatthama
AshwatthamaLv4

Ya this novel is waste , thinks door review

Haowie
HaowieLv13

Thanks for helping me dodge a bullet on this bs.

Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv5

everything you said only accentuates more, the sh!t that the protagonist seems to be

Inmortal_Dog:Español: Todo lo que hace en ese momento es para recibir un mayor Karma para su dojutsu, ademas de que el prácticamente no pierde nada al compartir esas técnicas, ademas de que son técnicas simples(para el) y el puede conseguir mas adelante mejores y no te olvides de que su clan necesita protección y el es demasiado débil en ese momento, que pasaría si el hokage lo toma como una amenaza por lo intrigante que es al tener esa edad, puede eliminar todo su clan y que gana con eso, una bullshit. Ingles: Everything he does at that moment is to receive more Karma for his dojutsu, besides that he practically loses nothing by sharing those techniques, besides they are simple techniques (for him) and he can get better later and not forget that his clan needs protection and he is too weak at that moment, what would happen if the hokage takes him as a threat because of how intriguing he is at that age, he can eliminate all his clan and he wins with that, a bullshit.
Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

Sh*t its this is that kind of fan fic? I won't bother reading this then.

Foundation_Realm
Foundation_RealmLv4

Killed my interest of the novel just for how your comment on the mc. I hate that kind of mc when they say that he is a genius but he keeps doing stupid stuff

StingyGuy
StingyGuyLv4

I see all these negative comments but this story is still 4.5. Some bots in here

xunlovesyou
xunlovesyouLv3

I agree extremely frustrating

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

YgNear
YgNearLv3

Thanks

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