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MacBentley
MacBentleyLv56yr
2018-09-13 21:07

Dropped after reading chap 20. My reaction was like wtf? He’s still a low level chunin with all of his shits? Also when he gave out his cooking techniques he oly asked for 5% of the income but now it says that he cant craft **** because doesn’t have materials because he’s too fucking broke?!? Like wtf? He invented the technique and his parents doesn't give him any. They know that he is a fucking genius but they doesn't support him and ****?!? I know that your slowing down the progress, but at least give us a reason why he doesn't have enough money and isn't a sage by now and etc. really a bad chapter and bad progress so far. Doubting if I will continue reading further.

Reborn in the Narutoverse

Daoist_Over_God
4.3
157 Chs

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Suriel8224
Suriel8224Lv5

Agree. This author brain is Broke too maybe. Hahs

6yr
19
Pripriri
PripririLv5

Hahaha he only wants 5% and the mc thinks he is a genius hahaha.. The author is trying hard.. I dont really feel if he is mc or just a side character making People in naruto and let them fight for him

6yr
17
equinotic
equinoticLv13

I don't think that the 5% is all that big either, but he still gets somewhat of a large amount by collecting 5% revenue from all businesses that incorporate the chakra beast cooking method. In regards to why he is "broke" is simply because he said the materials were too expensive to buy on the market. Lastly, I believe the MC mentioned how he wanted to not use the money from his family and make his own profit without the cooking method (or something similar to that if I recall correctly). However, it's beyond me why he actually does that part and doesn't request money for his family for at least some things. As for the first point on the chunin-level, I believe that was only in regards to chakra? His fighting capabilities are much higher than a chunin-level person if he plays his cards right.

6yr
7
SpiraSpira
SpiraSpiraLv14

5% of gross is actually not that bad a fee for a novel production method considering you dont have to buy any of the materials or pay for labor. a traditional licensure of production patents in our world would probably be about 5-10%, combined with a one time payout in the beginning of the contract term.

4yr
3
GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3

the story is garbage

2yr
Iwanttodie
IwanttodieLv4

MAYBE JUST MAYBE , the writing isnt perfect and you dont need too take a massive dump over it just cuz of... cooking.

2yr
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Roktah
RoktahLv15

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bronzeFinger
bronzeFingerLv6

Love the novel, would recommend it to all Naruto lovers. The MC has a new bloodline, which is pretty cool and also a system. But not to over-powered. The MC also has new Doujutsu with different powers. Only 2 chapters have been released till. But looking forward to more.

6yr
Pripriri
PripririLv5

This is frustating to read......... I saw some a lot of goodie mc but not this much. This mc is annoying as ****.......hes giving free for everthing and he thinks hes a genius....... Wth. Can i masturbate and shoot into the tree does that MEAN im a genius too?? AUTHOR WANTS TO BE A GOOD PERSON SO MUCH BUT IM SURE IN REAL LIFE YOUR JUST PIECE OF SHIT...... IM WONDERING WHY LOT OF PEOPLE GIVING THESE 5 STARS... MAYBE THE AUTHOR CREAT NEW ACCOUNTS JUST TO RATE HIS NOVEL??

6yr
BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv13

Story is terrible it had a great concept and could have been great. Author made him to op to fast. I dont mind op mcs but they had him being op from the start. If you make a story reimcarnation it has to be logical i cant read about a 1 yr old genius mc who reinvents a cultivation technique and everyone is fine with it. In my opinion there is much better stuff to do then waste your time reading this shi t.

6yr
P2nda
P2ndaLv3

Started off ok....then author decides to use crap from naruto fillers and those cringe naruto movies. Author likes trash apparently -----------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
AloofPanda
AloofPandaLv13

Reveal spoiler

5yr
memberberry
memberberryLv5

1 million views !!! if I were Masashi Kishimoto would be calling my lawyer now ........................................................................................................................................................................

6yr
sanguine
sanguineLv6

At first I really enjoyed this novel because it was unique and stuff with the new bloodline and dojutsu but then it turned into "let's change the story of naruto but show him with someone else's perspective" Really disappointing

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