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BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv136yr
2018-09-03 21:54

Story is terrible it had a great concept and could have been great. Author made him to op to fast. I dont mind op mcs but they had him being op from the start. If you make a story reimcarnation it has to be logical i cant read about a 1 yr old genius mc who reinvents a cultivation technique and everyone is fine with it. In my opinion there is much better stuff to do then waste your time reading this shi t.

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Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5

Y que hace, esperar a que su familia muera porque las técnicas destrozan sus órganos internos por el mal flujo de chakra que viene al practicarla, recuerda que estas en un mundo donde prácticamente hay dioses, no creo que se asusten por un niño inteligente.

BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv13

Wish i knew what you were saying buddy

Inmortal_Dog:Y que hace, esperar a que su familia muera porque las técnicas destrozan sus órganos internos por el mal flujo de chakra que viene al practicarla, recuerda que estas en un mundo donde prácticamente hay dioses, no creo que se asusten por un niño inteligente.
Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5

Tu dices que no te gusta que un mc de un año pueda hacer arreglar tecnicas y todos puedan aceptarlo, pero crees que deba hacer el MC, esperar a que sus familiares mueran por la tecnica y no hacer nada y que no sospechen de el y si no tienes ni idea, entonces tu comentario es un bullshit.

da_tian
da_tianLv14

sad thing is he is still too weak with all those cheats. read elder schrolls naruto i like it better because i feel it is how the ninja world really is like instead of this ***** ninja world.

LunacyVonKlaus
LunacyVonKlausLv5

hey bro any good naruto fanfic like elder scroll where mc is not naruto/naruto bff/konoha fags. elder scroll is already drop right?

da_tian:sad thing is he is still too weak with all those cheats. read elder schrolls naruto i like it better because i feel it is how the ninja world really is like instead of this ***** ninja world.
loner_rain_daoist
loner_rain_daoistLv4

wtf, Kakashi ti's already the best genius in the naruto world, what it's the necessity to make a character so OP? best if you do to Naruto can Manage the Kyubby when he born and kill Obito and finish with madara after hour's of be born, rebirth her parent and have a nice growth...

zilla00
zilla00Lv4

I used google translation and it said If you have any problems with your family, then you will find them on the internet before the chakra of the already practicable, recurrent and unpredictable hay dioses, no matter what you are looking for. I'm not sure if it's right.

BloodyDaoist_:Wish i knew what you were saying buddy
BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv13

Sounds perfect to me 👍

zilla00:I used google translation and it said If you have any problems with your family, then you will find them on the internet before the chakra of the already practicable, recurrent and unpredictable hay dioses, no matter what you are looking for. I'm not sure if it's right.
johnmyth
johnmythLv5

No that translation is not right. What he was trying to say was " What to do?, do you expect him to wait for his family to die because the technique they use destroy their organs because of the bad chakra flow? Remember in this world there are practically gods, do you think they will be scared by a smart kid? " In his second post it was pretty much the same thing. Btw I'm pretty sure he was 3 years old when he did that and in that setting kids start training at 4 he only started early because he showed he was a genius by reading and talking a lot earlier and the reason they followed what he said was because the core concept was still there and his grandfather tried it to test the results which I cant really blame them if their technique was killing them slowly

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