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AusNecromancer
AusNecromancerLv116yr
2018-09-25 17:06

“That is a lovely painting there, but you spilt the paint.” -Best analogy. I am sorry man but I have to write the review. First and for most this story is good! I really enjoyed it up to the last few chapters. The story is well written and thought out he is a great author. Thumbs up to you. However! The last few chapters piss me off. You didn’t need to kill them MCs love interest, you did it for “story development” that wasn’t needed! Not only dose he have a goal but he has a dream to! And bull**** you needed him to be healed by Tsunade to have her as the 5th! Karin could have been injured thus needing Tsunade! Sorry for my rant, but I am done. I will not be reading any more, if this is the path you wish to take. Thank you for reading bye bye.

Reborn in the Narutoverse

Daoist_Over_God
4.3
157 Chs

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Daoist_Over_God
Daoist_Over_GodAuthor

Sorry you stopped reading, you missed Karin's resurrection. Q Q ^

5yr
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Roktah
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MacBentley
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Dropped after reading chap 20. My reaction was like wtf? He’s still a low level chunin with all of his shits? Also when he gave out his cooking techniques he oly asked for 5% of the income but now it says that he cant craft **** because doesn’t have materials because he’s too fucking broke?!? Like wtf? He invented the technique and his parents doesn't give him any. They know that he is a fucking genius but they doesn't support him and ****?!? I know that your slowing down the progress, but at least give us a reason why he doesn't have enough money and isn't a sage by now and etc. really a bad chapter and bad progress so far. Doubting if I will continue reading further.

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Chaos_Overseer
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bronzeFinger
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Love the novel, would recommend it to all Naruto lovers. The MC has a new bloodline, which is pretty cool and also a system. But not to over-powered. The MC also has new Doujutsu with different powers. Only 2 chapters have been released till. But looking forward to more.

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Pripriri
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This is frustating to read......... I saw some a lot of goodie mc but not this much. This mc is annoying as ****.......hes giving free for everthing and he thinks hes a genius....... Wth. Can i masturbate and shoot into the tree does that MEAN im a genius too?? AUTHOR WANTS TO BE A GOOD PERSON SO MUCH BUT IM SURE IN REAL LIFE YOUR JUST PIECE OF SHIT...... IM WONDERING WHY LOT OF PEOPLE GIVING THESE 5 STARS... MAYBE THE AUTHOR CREAT NEW ACCOUNTS JUST TO RATE HIS NOVEL??

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BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv13

Story is terrible it had a great concept and could have been great. Author made him to op to fast. I dont mind op mcs but they had him being op from the start. If you make a story reimcarnation it has to be logical i cant read about a 1 yr old genius mc who reinvents a cultivation technique and everyone is fine with it. In my opinion there is much better stuff to do then waste your time reading this shi t.

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P2nda
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Started off ok....then author decides to use crap from naruto fillers and those cringe naruto movies. Author likes trash apparently -----------------------------------------------------------------------

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memberberry
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1 million views !!! if I were Masashi Kishimoto would be calling my lawyer now ........................................................................................................................................................................

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sanguine
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At first I really enjoyed this novel because it was unique and stuff with the new bloodline and dojutsu but then it turned into "let's change the story of naruto but show him with someone else's perspective" Really disappointing

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