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POKEMON RISE

作者: Theothegiant
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Waking up in the cold depths of space, no memory of what happened and what got me here, out in the distance i felt the presence of something, something greater than anything i've ever seen. The light sparkles my way as a celestial being calls out to me. "You're not going to die just yet," It muttered, a bright light quickly obstructing my view. and that's how it started, so hey. If you got some free time why don't you check out my first and last pokemon adventure

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Chapter 1the start of my new adventure.

I opened my eyes to the stars of the galaxy, floating in space, the cold embracing me ever so tightly, I couldn't move, I couldnt breath, My lungs tightened though it didn't pain me, it was very uncomfortable.

'I can't breathe,' I thought, my mind hazy and my body numb to anything but the cold.

Millions of stars shining right before my eyes as I start to lose consciousness, though one star in particular stood out to me. It gets closer the more my thoughts drift away, becoming blind to the elements around me, I go into a deep slumber….

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"Aww he's finally waking up!" I heard a voice, soft and gentle, kind and pure.

The warmth of someone holding me tight to their bodies, a warmth I hadn't felt in a while, I opened my eyes to see a beautiful woman with black hair and marine blue eyes, her smile soft and warm.

" Your name from now on will be...Ayuna." She uttered, rocking me from side to side.

Though I have no memory of my past, I can't help but feel like something's missing, I had so many questions bottled up within me.

'Who was that, that thing that approached me.' I thought to myself, my mind wandering as the woman who seemed to be my mother cradled my infant body, singing sweet songs in my ear

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Two years have passed since that moment and I'm already causing mischief like any two year old would.

"Hey Ayuna, put that down!" My mother called out to me, seeing I had just picked up a knife from the kitchen.

Ever since I was little I was attracted to climbing, I don't know why, it just felt right.

"gotcha!" my mom scooped me from the table to take the knife out of my hand.

"You sure do like climbing don't you?" She teased tickling my stomach with her finger before putting the knife down on the table. I yawned.

"sounds like someone's sleepy." my mother chuckled to herself putting me to bed, my marine blue eyes slowly drifting off into a deep slumber.

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"oh, neat scarf!" I shouted, in excitement, I was 5 at the time, looking through the basement out of boredom.

My mom walked in on me trying it on, her eyes welling up with tears of joy, covering her mouth at the sight of me.

"You look just like your father when he was a Pokemon trainer!" She smiled widely holding a mirror up to me so I could see how I look. 

I checked myself out in the mirror, my hands running through the white scarf on my neck with hints of blue at the tail.

I smiled, liking how it looked on me, but I couldn't help but wonder what a pokemon was. Our town is small, not many people live here either, just old folks and little kids. We never really left the town for anything since it had all that we needed.

"oh, would you look at the time? It's time for your first day of Pokemon school."

I looked at her even more confused, both from the reference of a school and at the convenient timing, in any cases I guess i'm about to find out.

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Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life. Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards. He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works! "I will save them all!" However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise. It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines? Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée. Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him. Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him. The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises. Something was wrong here! Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others... They like him! All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists. Grayfia even betrayed her husband. Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded. At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ... His inner voice! - The plot that has been changed by the MC: 1. To Love Ru: 95% 2. Highschool DxD: 83% 3. Seishun Buta Yarou: 82% 4. Oshi no Ko: 100% 5. Saekano: 98% 6. Oregairu: 93% 7. Shinmai Maou no Testament: 100% 8. Mieruko-chan: 99% 9. Trinity Seven: 70% 10. The Legendary Mechanic: 35% 11. Oresuki: 51% 12. Food Wars: 44% 13. Rent-A-Girlfriend: 61% 14. The World God Only Knows: 100% This is the plot change process of the latest chapter and will change as the story progresses. By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character. Oh and in chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem. - Get the latest chapters faster on my patreon. Support me on patreon to keep me motivated to write more chapters: www.patreon.com/DogLicker

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1 :the beginning
2 :Another chance
3 :Heros of unova
4 :A new adventure

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NocturnOwl
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I really enjoyed my readthrough of this story, I haven't delved into pokemon stories so this is a first for me. But it's safe to say it has finally scratched my pokemon adventures itch that I've had for so long and that's having only read through ten chapters at the time. I'll start off with writing quality, the pacing and structuring throughout chapters is very well done. Allowing the reader an easy read, for me I could go through 8 chapters in a breeze and still want more. Followed by great scenes and character descriptions. Stability of updates is very consistent, keeping to 5 chapters a week so you're bound to have more if you wait a little. Very impressive considering the author is updating 4 novels at once which would be pure brain melt for me XD. Story development, throughout my readthrough a lot of the normal directions pokemon go down, the author put his own spin on. Good example being the mc getting his first pokemon. Not just this but there are hints of something under the surface of the plot I don't want to spoil because it's good to get it blind like me. Character design. I love that the mc is not acting the typical way of a normal trainer since he has no knowledge of the pokemon world. So it becomes the fear of the unknown in the beginning making his developing perspective more believable. This allows a much more realistic opinion of pokemon to form rather than hamfisting into you their friends. The pokemon have distinct traits developed from what I've seen so far especially in Zorua. World background, the author knows pokemon in and out so the background is very stable with his own spin on certain things. This makes the scene transition great because they always know the specific name of where they want to go. As well as filling in the background of those said spots. I loved reading through the viridian forest. Very fun time there. If you're looking for a pokemon story that strays from the norm this is the one. Was such an enjoyable first readthrough and I can't wait to continue when I have some free time. Very excited to continue Keep going strong Theo!

Theothegiant
Theothegiant作者

Hi I'm the author of this book POKEMON RISE and I'm writing this review incase anyone wants to read but your not sure if you should pick it up or not. Writing Quality My writing style is decent i should say. I ask my friends to review my work often for any grammatical or story errors. Even this review! O(∩_∩)O Stability of updates Not to brag but, I never miss a time to update i normally update on Sundays, Saturdays and Wednesdays if your wondering. Sometimes I update before then like Thursdays or Tuesdays but those chapters are relatively short 90% of the time and are leading up to bigger more impactful chapters. Story Development So far the development of the story is going to plan. I try to make a story about time and timelines as simple as possible/ easy to understand. My goal with this book is to make it without a grandfather paradox even though that's the name of the evil team. Character Design The character design of the characters in this fanfic were inspired by other Pokemon trainers in the cannon story with my own twist on them to the point where they are completely original. I'm not the best at writing trauma but I try my best when writing these characters especially the main character. World Background Since this world is the world of Pokemon i didn't have to do much but shift the time points around and in doing that alot has changed along with a new region called "the Granite region" which is a region that apparently came from the past because of Celebi's influence. and that's about it. Hopefully this review encourages you to read it would mean a lot to me. O(∩_∩)O

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