Rubi_Stone

A perverted start I suppose.

Wow, such a representative of bulshiting arts. I myself don't like 90% of all novels and fanfics on this website, cause readers even can smell their shity odor from thousands miles away being in their own houses, and here a moron talks about a good novel being of poor quality, cause he, the idiot can't understand a thing. I myself like stories that has a slow development and only such fanfics can make you enjoy after you wait patiently for all chapters being released. Do tell me, what you imbecile wrote and made people enjoy?

Someone should address elephant in the room. This fic started ignoring common sense way too much. Why even berries from pokemon world would appear in one piece? And chapters are littered with such illogical details

That's true only if we consider all other circumstances. Third and probably danzo knew about his father, so they would not try to get him. And Kakashi is the son of genius. That putting aside, these two characters were way too favored by kishimoto. There are thousands of shinobi in konoha alone, but how many of them graduated so early and got to the kage level shinobi? I understand it s a fantasy world, but when did you last time speak and watch a 6 year old child's performance? They are clumy as hell, falling to the left and right. So I'm on authors side, this way it's more logical. And mc fears to attract attention

It's a bought review or author himself making rankings

dude, there is multiple energies in environment. and he's right you should pay more attention to the written. author may have forgotten it, but there are lots of confirmations of this fact, one of them being sasuke using the lightning from cloud for Kirin in a fight against itachi. if chakra can calòbarate with such phenomena, that means it has common ground with it.

Yeah, I judge. Come to any country of the world and they will do the same. Human beings are born racists and it will never change. Go live in any other country, and eventually one day you will read in people's eyes " the hell are you here, go back to where you came from". So this fancy bitchy talks about being not racist could live only in the minds of dumb children 10 to 16 years old. And don't get me wrong, you could be 40 by your ID, but if you still believe in such nonsense like inflation, santa and a place where people are not racists, then you r no older than 10. By the way, you don't need to read in their eyes sometimes. I personally witnessed how a group of japanese were calling a norwegian guy "white monkey" in their native language between themselves but were addressing him "bro" and talking with him all smiles in english. It was a kind of little restaurant and they were not friends.

Bro, don't do it to me, I'm still waiting GOT one. But If it's of same quality I just can't be more happy 😊

Hope there some change in storyline, not just keeping the main story and mc "walking by". But logic and character development so far good for me, just need more chapters to read.

Good enough for me. just don't stop and add more new chapters