Modern Family: Gacha

The writing and grammer is good but this is exactly word to word the show modern family. The MC has made literally 0 changes in the story and and the places he even appears is when he is also shot with the bb gun alongside Dylan and has a football tryout where Alex visits but other than that he is just at the place listening to everyone,he has less than 3-4 dialogues per chapter is that.

It’s not bad, but that’s because 95% of the story is just a direct copy-paste of the modern family script. The “MC” is just a side character that doesn’t influence the story at all. And of that 5% of the story that includes the “MC,” 90% is just the Mc reacting to stuff the Dunphys/Pritchetts said, as if he’s watching a tv show, without interacting in any meaningful way…

don't drop it please. .. .. .. .... .. .

If your here for a modern family story that kinda original and had new scenes and not a copy and paste then leave. This a copy and paste of plot with same dialogue. Mc is at best a side character. Just there. Its a lazy af story that reads like a summary

always good to see a modern family fanfiction keep up the good work

please dont drop it is good ff I like it

This story is so BORING I hate to say the first 8 chapters were complete copies of modern family but I think after so much criticism the author decided to change that and imma be honest he should’ve just left it cause the story he is cooking is just so boring and not even funny. Mc is as bland as an uncooked potato not to mention extremely questionable when it comes to how young he likes them. Like hes reincarnated and he ends up falling in love with Alex a 13 year old which to me would be ok if mc died at 13 but even though auhtor hasn’t said anything about mc age you can just tell he has the maturity of someone well past 13 so it feels like a ‘groomy’ relationship. The interactions are plain and the only thing that kept me from leaving was the football but even that has to make way for the dull romance the author has served up In conclusion, the author tried to make another good modern family fic but failed miserably

This story is just modern family with an uninteresting side character. I think the weirdest thing in entire story is that a previously 20 ish year old is calling a 13 year old, cute and adorable I mean he’ flirting with a kid. Just weird and the mc make no difference so far anyway.

The writing is decent, but that's pretty much it. It's either exactly following the original plot or developing an awkward romance between a rather uninteresting MC and Alex, and it's not awkward because they are 13. They are basically telling each other that they are interested but there is no progress in their relationship, and it's attributed to the MC being either dense or scared. And he is supposed to have gotten master manipulator from the gacha, so even if he isn't using the skill to manipulate, he should have the observational ability to realize the situation. The scenes from the show are left with no change outside his comments that don't actually contribute anything besides characters nodding and saying how smart he is. And whenever it's not about the original plot, you randomly get paragraphs of flowery descriptions that really don't fit with the whole "it's a modern family fanfic" vibe... Really out of place and kinda pretentious.

the first chapters were copy and paste from moder family without much interaction from the protagonist then the author made the protagonist a shy guy who supposedly has the intelligence of reed richards and also 30 years old, i think it was a waste of a good story.

So at the start it was okay as they were introducing the MC to the family slowly and realistically. But then after a while the its begins to go down hill the MC's father is a mix of callous, bullying and irresponsible i have never seen before. I don't even feel that he loves his son based on his actions and the biggest issue is that after a while you notice he starts ending chapters without finishing plotlines leaving you abruptly cut off wondering what happened. Then their is the MC himself. Started out cool and smart and mature kinda aloof. Then after his father is introduced he becomes shy dumb slapsticks comedian he also never uses his intelligence to do anything and the story just gets more and more boring and chapters cut off more and more of the plotlines of the show. Any modification of the plot turns out to be unfunny slapstick or straight up boring. And with the MC becoming slowly a normal boring child in a tv show. I don't find that at all interesting.

So I like the story an I think the writing is good but so much of this is just a copy and paste from the show. Which like I understand if you want to go episode by episode but nothing is changing he is just a side character. There is no impact from his presence really.

story real name: modern family: simp ped0***le gacha Starting when the mc is introduced as someone who was clearly an adult in his past life and who clearly sees himself as someone older who falls in love with a 13-year-old alex, if the mc is okay with starting a relationship with a girl when He thinks like an adult, the author's thinking is really questionable. If this story could be half of this story: Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family) there they do present a mc who knows how to deal with younger girls and create interest while he is with more mature girls, all in perfect balance.

Ok, so I don't normally write very many reviews but i felt like there needed to be something said. The author clearly has zero thoughts other than the basic plot of the story of modern family. He has very few inserts of the actual MC, its like he gets all these gifts from the gacha but doesn't know what to do with them. The grammar is terrible, tons of he/she mix ups, miss spellings and poor word choice (Reads like it was machine translated) The story development is also terrible, if you hadn't watched the show half the time you seriously can't infer what is going on in the story, it also cuts out all over the place when you expect more development. This coincides with the world background, without the show, there is none. So watch the show side by side while reading to really get a sense of what's going on. The MC is the least fleshed out character of the whole story.

trash, the mc is a side character the author doesn't show the mc's pov it all happens with the famlily

not to my liking the character development is soo trash and no story on it's own only trash description of some nature's the mc is the worst

It’s good but I just wish it would be more mc pov but Han just a copy and paste of the show with just a bit of mc… it should be more mc and little bits of the show, the show can develop without him so focus on developing mc individually.

it's a gacha that never gets used. there are entire chapters where the main character is just not involved should just watch the show it would be the same .

I used to Really like it, the story is good, gramma is fine, good MC. the problem, which I hate, is that the chapters are not full chapters. so it just jumpsuit over alot, and it clearly cuts off important Bits. it's a story with a gacha, but we don't know when he rolls, and just randomly has 2 new gachas (around chapter 60)... that we only know the name off. if anyone has a reason why the chapters are cut in half, please tell me, but in the meantime I'm gonna drop it.

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