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I love stargate, but damn the AI slop is too strong in this one

Also, what territories? What alliance? What does that have anything to do with Lantean tech?

Bullsh-t if he was in the gate room when it happened he could’ve pulled the alarm sooner bc iirc half the reason for the Air Force getting their butts kicked in the opening scene is that the officers didn’t react quickly. They waited until after the shooting already started to call for backup

Huh? What the hell does his system level have to do with what actions he takes? The system doesn’t seem to actually impact anything yet, so why does it determine what actions he can or can’t take? Also, wasn’t the system supposed to be non-sentient? Now it’s like it’s pulling his strings

Huh? He can’t prevent the ‘infection’ via medical detection. Maybe he can save Kawalskys life, but unless he goes to chulac he can’t prevent the Gould from jumping into him

… this doesn’t seem very Lantean-like. Now if you made the system of Ori origin it would make sense, but right now the systems function seems kinda incongruous with its origin

Siler the immortal

Um, this seems different from the end of the last chapter! wtf

Nice, this is rare in these types of novels. Usually secondary characters are enemies or lackeys, but rarely actual friends of the MC.