The writing and grammer is good but this is exactly word to word the show modern family. The MC has made literally 0 changes in the story and and the places he even appears is when he is also shot with the bb gun alongside Dylan and has a football tryout where Alex visits but other than that he is just at the place listening to everyone,he has less than 3-4 dialogues per chapter is that.

It’s not bad, but that’s because 95% of the story is just a direct copy-paste of the modern family script. The “MC” is just a side character that doesn’t influence the story at all. And of that 5% of the story that includes the “MC,” 90% is just the Mc reacting to stuff the Dunphys/Pritchetts said, as if he’s watching a tv show, without interacting in any meaningful way…

If your here for a modern family story that kinda original and had new scenes and not a copy and paste then leave. This a copy and paste of plot with same dialogue. Mc is at best a side character. Just there. Its a lazy af story that reads like a summary

always good to see a modern family fanfiction keep up the good work

please dont drop it is good ff I like it

This story is so BORING I hate to say the first 8 chapters were complete copies of modern family but I think after so much criticism the author decided to change that and imma be honest he should’ve just left it cause the story he is cooking is just so boring and not even funny. Mc is as bland as an uncooked potato not to mention extremely questionable when it comes to how young he likes them. Like hes reincarnated and he ends up falling in love with Alex a 13 year old which to me would be ok if mc died at 13 but even though auhtor hasn’t said anything about mc age you can just tell he has the maturity of someone well past 13 so it feels like a ‘groomy’ relationship. The interactions are plain and the only thing that kept me from leaving was the football but even that has to make way for the dull romance the author has served up In conclusion, the author tried to make another good modern family fic but failed miserably

This story is just modern family with an uninteresting side character. I think the weirdest thing in entire story is that a previously 20 ish year old is calling a 13 year old, cute and adorable I mean he’ flirting with a kid. Just weird and the mc make no difference so far anyway.

The writing is decent, but that's pretty much it. It's either exactly following the original plot or developing an awkward romance between a rather uninteresting MC and Alex, and it's not awkward because they are 13. They are basically telling each other that they are interested but there is no progress in their relationship, and it's attributed to the MC being either dense or scared. And he is supposed to have gotten master manipulator from the gacha, so even if he isn't using the skill to manipulate, he should have the observational ability to realize the situation. The scenes from the show are left with no change outside his comments that don't actually contribute anything besides characters nodding and saying how smart he is. And whenever it's not about the original plot, you randomly get paragraphs of flowery descriptions that really don't fit with the whole "it's a modern family fanfic" vibe... Really out of place and kinda pretentious.

the first chapters were copy and paste from moder family without much interaction from the protagonist then the author made the protagonist a shy guy who supposedly has the intelligence of reed richards and also 30 years old, i think it was a waste of a good story.