I decided to try writing my own novel, I definitely underestimated how much time and energy it takes to write. I underestimated the process to make a good novel. Good work all authors!!
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😭😭 Someone told me it was gonna be harem.. I didn’t wanna believe it.. the many chapters of romance with tsunade is just pointless.. orochimaru in one relationship is braindead.. y does he need another?😭
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U would he take this? He can’t even use it.. I would’ve chosen the body flicker technique.. even if it was d rank like he said.. the original body flicker is also a d rank technique and he could still improve it as he already has a completed technique.
Y tf would they do that? Fake🤣 This type of thing doesn’t just happen people don’t just intentionally spread the word of a game except when it comes up in a topic or they are debating about something along those lines. Why would they help a random person spread his game?
Bless u bruh😎
I thought I was done but there is still more to say. First off we don’t need so many chapters of a baby’s life especially since we are just spectators to all actions at this point. A few timeskips will do while just adding a little summary of things that went down or a flashback of important event… I had great expectations for this novel since he got his special abilities, but the next chapter just destroyed all expectations… smh
Only thing good in this was the first chapter.. everything else is just AI, AI writing style just rambles on without ever getting to the point and it uses complex/advanced words when it’s not needed.. this writing style is just alienating the readers. The idea was good but if u can’t be bothered to write in your own words, then pls don’t write at all. Even if u want to use ai, at least proofread the ai then write it in "human language” like a high schooler 😭. Other than that, I like the character design and story development, everything else is just not it