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Senju_0000
Senju_0000Lv41yr
2023-06-30 15:28

The writing and grammer is good but this is exactly word to word the show modern family. The MC has made literally 0 changes in the story and and the places he even appears is when he is also shot with the bb gun alongside Dylan and has a football tryout where Alex visits but other than that he is just at the place listening to everyone,he has less than 3-4 dialogues per chapter is that.

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Goat13
Goat13Lv4

It only has 8 chapters right now so give it some time.

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

thanks for the heads up!

Peryite
PeryiteLv5

Has it changed at all?

Goat13:It only has 8 chapters right now so give it some time.
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Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4

The author has changed it yes, but for the worse like so bad you would be wishing author just the plot the same

Peryite:Has it changed at all?
Goat13
Goat13Lv4

sign, yes...but it went in a bad direction

Peryite:Has it changed at all?
daydreamer_no1
daydreamer_no1Lv14

it got worse

Goat13:sign, yes...but it went in a bad direction
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Vanix_
Vanix_Lv4

alex love interest seriously

DetachedDreamer:thanks for the heads up!
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