Harry Potter: Ode To Nothingness

a story worth reading, there is plenty i disagree with but the writing quality more than makes up for it. a fun read

Alright here is my updated review, the rating remains the same.Writing quality was good but in latest chapters there was a need of quick editing, nonetheless, the quality remains the same- stars wise.Story development is where I would like to complain a little bit, and also mix character design with it too- Everything so far is far more realistic and explanatory, the flaw I would say is in, character interaction, it is either not present or very superficial, I would understand the counter to this point, saying our MC was poltician when he died and he is mentally far older than the bunch of kids surrounding him. But the I could counter ask, if he is vying for future minister seat and purging of most of the canceratous people surrounding it, and for this ge need immense support and recognition, so according to story so far he tries to subtly manipulate people around him, in a non harmful way, of course. Then what about when he first arrived inside the train and decided to make friends, because 7 years of trust and friendship would potentially be for lifetime, also, if he wants better manipulation, then what better way to become friends and what better example than Voldy or Dumble.I won't say much about updating stability, I gave it 4 stars due to selfishness as for me a five star is when I can binge read the whole story 😂The world back ground is the only one that got five stars, because, I really love those short interludes and world building, first time saw someone include middle-east asia and Indian subcontinent.Oh one request- If MC pursued Fleur, please make it somewhat mature relationship and pursuing, as he is mentally older and lusting after someone doesn't suit his character.

Why is it that good books especially fanfic occasionally have the least amount of readers and reviewers? Anyway here's an easy 5 star of mine.

Author Review- This is the promised rewrite of my original story. Changes-- Focused on world-building--Characters will feel less one-dimensional--An mc that doesn't make reckless decisions--MC practising magic instead of just fighting people left and right and creating magic of-screen-

I found the original already entertaining and good, but this, this right here's the best rewrite I have ever read.Now let me tell you why. Most people just start the same and end differently in the middle, but he actually rewrote the entire thing different background, spells, new avenues to get broken, and demands of nerfs afterwards one of my favourite reads currently.

i really like the fact that the author explain how magic works. the mc is not op but he will develop his power: hope he will use a lot of ward and develop a power-system like full metal alchemist. the author could also explore the legacy of hufflepuff.

The novel is very good but the summary is confusing I am in chapter 15 and Satoru Gojo has nothing to do with the novel and the MC's name is Nathan Gray not Satoru Gojo

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This fic is a lot better than the previous version with it being paced a lot better with him not getting super OP from before even Hogwarts If the author keeps up and consistently updates with this good of quality then it will be pretty high up there with Harry Potter Fanfics

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Very good story.

This novel is great. This is a summary of what you want to know before reading ................................................................

this novel is such a great hidden gem why didn't it show up in fanfiction ranking list kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

I like this new version of the story, it has me hooked since the begining. The writing is clear and even for me a non english is easy to read and understand. The mc is strong but quite realistic, i will await more chapters. Sorry for my grammar. 5 stars so far.

after the rewrite, it became very good. a great move author san. keep up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I have a rule in what HP fanfic i read. One rule is NO GUNS. Guns cheapen magic think of harry not learning anything at school the walking up to voldermort and bang hes dead. It makes you ask why even make a wizarding world. NOW like every good rule thier are exceptions. Here they are its not just if an HP fanfic has guns its more. If the MC is amazingly powerful or talented at magic AND uses guns. Thats where this story is broken for me. See ive read and loved the HP fanfic (cant remember name) where Harry loses his trial is kick out of the magic world and joins the army becoming apart of the SAS. Then takes out malfoy and voldermort with a sniper. That is when the exceptions make great stories. Or thier is one fanfic where harry becomes Duke of magical england and has planes and helicopters outfitted with magic and becomes a magical military. Again he maybe strong with magic but hes duke and apart of british aristocrats so he is duty bound to use everything to protect the country. But this is closer to the cheaping side where the MC is amazingly talented and powerful but just wants a magical gun. It cheapens all hes doing to become good at magic.

Realmente vale la pena esta historia el autor tiene muy claro lo que quiere hacer. Otro punto buenles quemantiene el poder del MC consistentes con el mundo y no como otros autores que el MC en 3 capítulos ya es un dios.