a story worth reading, there is plenty i disagree with but the writing quality more than makes up for it. a fun read

Alright here is my updated review, the rating remains the same.Writing quality was good but in latest chapters there was a need of quick editing, nonetheless, the quality remains the same- stars wise.Story development is where I would like to complain a little bit, and also mix character design with it too- Everything so far is far more realistic and explanatory, the flaw I would say is in, character interaction, it is either not present or very superficial, I would understand the counter to this point, saying our MC was poltician when he died and he is mentally far older than the bunch of kids surrounding him. But the I could counter ask, if he is vying for future minister seat and purging of most of the canceratous people surrounding it, and for this ge need immense support and recognition, so according to story so far he tries to subtly manipulate people around him, in a non harmful way, of course. Then what about when he first arrived inside the train and decided to make friends, because 7 years of trust and friendship would potentially be for lifetime, also, if he wants better manipulation, then what better way to become friends and what better example than Voldy or Dumble.I won't say much about updating stability, I gave it 4 stars due to selfishness as for me a five star is when I can binge read the whole story 😂The world back ground is the only one that got five stars, because, I really love those short interludes and world building, first time saw someone include middle-east asia and Indian subcontinent.Oh one request- If MC pursued Fleur, please make it somewhat mature relationship and pursuing, as he is mentally older and lusting after someone doesn't suit his character.

Why is it that good books especially fanfic occasionally have the least amount of readers and reviewers? Anyway here's an easy 5 star of mine.

Author Review- This is the promised rewrite of my original story. Changes-- Focused on world-building--Characters will feel less one-dimensional--An mc that doesn't make reckless decisions--MC practising magic instead of just fighting people left and right and creating magic of-screen-

I found the original already entertaining and good, but this, this right here's the best rewrite I have ever read.Now let me tell you why. Most people just start the same and end differently in the middle, but he actually rewrote the entire thing different background, spells, new avenues to get broken, and demands of nerfs afterwards one of my favourite reads currently.

i really like the fact that the author explain how magic works. the mc is not op but he will develop his power: hope he will use a lot of ward and develop a power-system like full metal alchemist. the author could also explore the legacy of hufflepuff.

The novel is very good but the summary is confusing I am in chapter 15 and Satoru Gojo has nothing to do with the novel and the MC's name is Nathan Gray not Satoru Gojo

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This fic is a lot better than the previous version with it being paced a lot better with him not getting super OP from before even Hogwarts If the author keeps up and consistently updates with this good of quality then it will be pretty high up there with Harry Potter Fanfics

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