scyfly

yet he looked at sam?

he doesnt know the plot. the winchesters are nothing but trouble with family drama, you couldnt pay me to tag along with them. trust? what trust, he hasnt told him shit

given that they can keep possessing the body even after it dies i find that highly unlikely. convulted system though

you know you actually put in more angst then supernatural did, we barely knew jessica after all. thats quite the achievement. too bad it was also very predictable that his parents were gonna die

and this is where the story shouldve started with a quick recap of his 'new' memories and then the system opening ending the chapter in 'shit supernatural'

you've filled 10 chapters with nothing but 'the flames' are supposed to be self explanatory? dissapointed he didnt start with christo

i would do it the other way around, introduce characters while the plot is happening. tbh ive skimmed most of what you wrote

yup time for them to die

really getting that supernatural feel here

that went both ways though, the good guys had some awesome magic or simply clever sollutions even before the bunker, they were just never used all that much. drama drama drama. its why i stopped watching