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X-Men: Feral Progeny (Marvel AU/What If?)

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The Wolverine is dead. One of Earth’s mightiest and most feral Heroes, dead….. The Avengers mourned his death. The Four sought out the reasoning behind it. The Mutants of The Xavier Institute thirsted for revenge. But that didn’t last long. He faded. Not even the city of Heroes— New York, felt the pang of his loss for long. Then again, New York is a busy place. Hell, it’s not called the concrete jungle for nothing. And a jungle it is, fit with a powerful predator hunting in the shadows. A predator stemming from Wolverines very early origins— an orchestrator of his entire existence….. or so they say. And this predator isn’t on just any hunt. He’s on the hunt for a successor. A successor that he believes can be found in the brood of Weapon X. A fact that couldn’t be more right after word spreads of a boy with omega-level abilities and a feral rage that can only be relative to the feral x-man, Wolverine…….. Extra Tags: Gore, Power-Fantasy, training, thriller, team-building….

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Jilid 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1 :A Storm is Born
Jilid 2 :A Beast Is Awakened
Jilid 3 :The Hunt Begins
Jilid 4 :Hunting for War/Warring for Revenge
Jilid 5 :Under the Midnight Sun
Jilid 6 :Into the Savage Lands

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Mr0Rabbit
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Maxfun3
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I’m at chapter 25. I’m not sure about update stability so I won’t talk about it. I think the writing quality is good but it needs some more work. I think it needs more filler for character interactions. I think that was one of the reasons some of the relationships he delveloped in between those time skips feel forced. Like what conversations did the mc have that made him accept Laura and the others as family so fast or what was talked about that he forgave one of the love interests so easily. It’s not being “edgy” to not easily forgive someone for trying to kill you. Without showing us these moments it kinda makes it feel like the same thing that happened in Naruto and Dragon Ball Z. With a few exceptions. If you write another story I suggest you go more slowly and less consistently of time skips. I know it’s boring but it makes the story more cohesive in the long run. Especially if you’re writing romance. I think the story development is great. Unlike other stories you made me care about the MC to the point where I get slightly upset at I think stupid things happened to him because I don’t want him to have survival guilt like I gained. For instance chapter 24. Even if it have some things I don’t like, you kept me on my toes. Looking back I mixed up some things and combined them with different stuff I rated. You haven’t really explored the world yet so I can’t really rate it. All in all good job just put more character interactions and less time skips for future projects if you want more of cohesive story.

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