I highly recommend this fic, it has a great Mc with an actual personality, likes, dislikes and he has a nice sense of humor. The author has a pretty great understanding and feel of the X Men characters. So you actually believe that they speak like their comic counterparts. The pacing is good, and action is suspenseful enough. It can get poetic at times but never lingers on it to the point of boredom. The MC's powers are cool and his progression in strength is interesting. There is an air of mystery in MCs background is an interesting mystery that is slowly being answered. Thankfully the author leaves a decent amount of bread crumbs and hints to keep us guessing. If you're interested in reading a good fic you can't go wrong with this one. It has my stamp of approval 👍.

Yo! Fury here with another body of work. This will be another Marvel AU but with What-If elements. And as AU’s go, certain events characters and abilities wil be tweaked. But nothing too crazy will happen, alot of what Im working off of will be a mix of the 616 Universe, the Ultimate Universe and some instances from the All-New X-Men comic line which will mix into my own creative universe. Also this is a Marvel AU with a focus on the X-Men and all things relating to Wolverine, but other heroes and villains will be featured. I can’t speak assuredly about uploads since I’m working on a few other novels, but this will be uploaded at a reasonable rate and when it isn’t I’ll give a heads up. Also no harem and much violence. Thanks for checking it out and feel free to ask questions 👍👍👍👍 have a great day🫡

This story is fun to read. The writing quality, story development and world background are beautifully executed and all the characters in this fic are very well written.So overall an amazing fanfic and i highly recommend this to anyone looking for a marvel fanfiction.

I’m at chapter 25. I’m not sure about update stability so I won’t talk about it. I think the writing quality is good but it needs some more work. I think it needs more filler for character interactions. I think that was one of the reasons some of the relationships he delveloped in between those time skips feel forced. Like what conversations did the mc have that made him accept Laura and the others as family so fast or what was talked about that he forgave one of the love interests so easily. It’s not being “edgy” to not easily forgive someone for trying to kill you. Without showing us these moments it kinda makes it feel like the same thing that happened in Naruto and Dragon Ball Z. With a few exceptions. If you write another story I suggest you go more slowly and less consistently of time skips. I know it’s boring but it makes the story more cohesive in the long run. Especially if you’re writing romance. I think the story development is great. Unlike other stories you made me care about the MC to the point where I get slightly upset at I think stupid things happened to him because I don’t want him to have survival guilt like I gained. For instance chapter 24. Even if it have some things I don’t like, you kept me on my toes. Looking back I mixed up some things and combined them with different stuff I rated. You haven’t really explored the world yet so I can’t really rate it. All in all good job just put more character interactions and less time skips for future projects if you want more of cohesive story.

good stories as always

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I haven’t finished it yet but I regret putting this book off for so long. This book is amazing. One of the best I’ve read on this app inna while.