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skyhound
skyhoundLv142yr
2022-11-10 10:06

I highly recommend this fic, it has a great Mc with an actual personality, likes, dislikes and he has a nice sense of humor. The author has a pretty great understanding and feel of the X Men characters. So you actually believe that they speak like their comic counterparts. The pacing is good, and action is suspenseful enough. It can get poetic at times but never lingers on it to the point of boredom. The MC's powers are cool and his progression in strength is interesting. There is an air of mystery in MCs background is an interesting mystery that is slowly being answered. Thankfully the author leaves a decent amount of bread crumbs and hints to keep us guessing. If you're interested in reading a good fic you can't go wrong with this one. It has my stamp of approval 👍.

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YO! Thanks a bunch for the thoughtful review man. Glad you can find some enjoyment here. We shall keep working 😈🤝

Eragon_Targaryen
Eragon_TargaryenLv4

What is the Main Characters name, I’m just about to start the story and would like to know.

_Avatar0FFury_:YO! Thanks a bunch for the thoughtful review man. Glad you can find some enjoyment here. We shall keep working 😈🤝
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_Avatar0FFury_Author

Azreal Megazord Lucifer 😈😫🔥🔥🔥…..OBVIOUSLY, jk. It is Bronte Connors 👍

Eragon_Targaryen:What is the Main Characters name, I’m just about to start the story and would like to know.
Eragon_Targaryen
Eragon_TargaryenLv4

_Avatar0FFury_:Azreal Megazord Lucifer 😈😫🔥🔥🔥…..OBVIOUSLY, jk. It is Bronte Connors 👍
Shy_Anderson_2572
Shy_Anderson_2572Lv14

Who is the female lead?

skyhound
skyhoundLv14

Ilyana aka Magik, with a slow thoughtful progression in their relationship. Most of the focus is on Mc's journey so don't expect too much focus on her. At the risk of spoilers her role is more prominent in the current latest arc.

Shy_Anderson_2572:Who is the female lead?
CharlieRider
CharlieRiderLv4

is he hero or anti hero

skyhound
skyhoundLv14

Hes's an anti-hero but is leaning closer and closer to the hero category. He's caring to his family, friends and tries to protect innocents. He's got morals but the story circumstances push him to kill in self defense or for protecting others. At the risk of spoilers most of his kills are monsters, vampires, or feral mutants.

CharlieRider:is he hero or anti hero
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Maxfun3Lv14

I’m at chapter 25. I’m not sure about update stability so I won’t talk about it. I think the writing quality is good but it needs some more work. I think it needs more filler for character interactions. I think that was one of the reasons some of the relationships he delveloped in between those time skips feel forced. Like what conversations did the mc have that made him accept Laura and the others as family so fast or what was talked about that he forgave one of the love interests so easily. It’s not being “edgy” to not easily forgive someone for trying to kill you. Without showing us these moments it kinda makes it feel like the same thing that happened in Naruto and Dragon Ball Z. With a few exceptions. If you write another story I suggest you go more slowly and less consistently of time skips. I know it’s boring but it makes the story more cohesive in the long run. Especially if you’re writing romance. I think the story development is great. Unlike other stories you made me care about the MC to the point where I get slightly upset at I think stupid things happened to him because I don’t want him to have survival guilt like I gained. For instance chapter 24. Even if it have some things I don’t like, you kept me on my toes. Looking back I mixed up some things and combined them with different stuff I rated. You haven’t really explored the world yet so I can’t really rate it. All in all good job just put more character interactions and less time skips for future projects if you want more of cohesive story.

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