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Trying to get better at writing and making my novel Beasts: Reborn, into something incredible. Feel free to lmk how I’m doing.😤🤝
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_Avatar0FFury_12hBalas alucardtfs- _Avatar0FFury_5dBalas ethandavis9424
#THATGIRL🔥
Before he could through his spear, a blur flew across his vision and smashed into the floor near the Goblins, followed by a glacial wave of ice that ripped and broke apart the left half of the Goblins in an incredibly violent manner. The others were hit by the pieces of their comrades and sent tumbling through the forest as Ursula roared from atop the icey torrents and threw her axes at them angrily. - _Avatar0FFury_6dBalas ethandavis9424
There’s heavy inspiration there so you’re on
"....You are a tortured soul. The chorus of passing has fallen on your deaf ears countless times. And yet, here you are....saving another. You may not know what you are, but I am sure of what I see. As sure as I am of my own song. The Rugaspiora will watch over you...and I will not forget." - _Avatar0FFury_7dBalas ethandavis9424
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Aiko was The Crimson Banshee— only ever letting out her unique spine tingling screams at the sight or promise of spilled blood. Dier was The Beast, a giant Lupine of Remus from the Sunlands that could probably punch a hole through the best of Samuel's armor. And lastly, Jack who was titled, The Ripper. - _Avatar0FFury_7dBalas GOD_KING_AQUACh 16 16 ASTRAL GREENWOOD
- _Avatar0FFury_8dBalas JosephKNMCh 16 16 ASTRAL GREENWOOD
- _Avatar0FFury_8dBalas JosephKNMCh 16 16 ASTRAL GREENWOOD
- _Avatar0FFury_8dBalas GOD_KING_AQUACh 16 16 ASTRAL GREENWOOD
- _Avatar0FFury_9dBalas GOD_KING_AQUACh 15 15 REBIRTH
- _Avatar0FFury_11dBerkomentar
Did you purposefully change the font for the rest of the chapter?
Adam pushed off the lockers, his sneakers squeaking on the polished floor. He had a mission: make Aria-Luna's first day unforgettable. Adam had been assigned the task of showing her around. They shared the same home room, and he was chosen because he was the class minister. His best friend, Bryce, had already cornered her near the vending machines, reciting poetry about sunsets and forbidden love. Bryce was like that-always falling headfirst into infatuation, like a clumsy puppy chasing its tail. - _Avatar0FFury_11dBerkomentar
“A constellation of curiosity in a group of patterned skirts and loose shoes” is pretty sick prose☝🏽🔥
The twenty-minute break before club time was a cacophony of teenage chatter. Students spilled out of classrooms, their backpacks slung over shoulders, laughter echoing through the marble hallways. Adam Greene leaned against the lockers, his eyes scanning the crowd for Aria. And there she was-a constellation of curiosity in a group of patterned skirts and loose shoes. Aria was by the water fountain, her fingers touching what seemed to be an old library book. Her eyes flitted from one face to another, as if memorizing names and quirks. - _Avatar0FFury_12dBalas JosephKNMCh 12 12 RISE
- _Avatar0FFury_13dBalas User_Name001Ch 75 CHPT 74: … and at Peace
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Hey man, thanks a ton for reading I’m glad you could find enjoyment. Since you’ve read up to the end and likely saw my last authors note, I always had plans for romance, and more seasons, but sometimes a story writes itself for you and the end isnt what you had planned. Marco in my mind was always going to go with Cora. They both had that cold killer nature , family trauma, with a surprisingly soft undertone and Marco had a decent relationship with Derek (which means a ton since he was yk). I felt they could both bring out that soft side of eachother if developed correctly and I was excited to do so. Unfortunately Marco living in my opinion took away from what was a pretty good full circle revenge story. (More than a few disagree unfortunately 😔) He didn’t get the girl, but he did get peace, for himself and his people and despite all my crazy boosted power scaling here, I believe there’s substance in reminding ppl that revenge will always at least take two in some way . Also I swear I removed the romance tag. I’ll check again, so sorry 🙏😭 Double also, new teenwolf fic otw!
Ch 75 CHPT 74: … and at Peace - _Avatar0FFury_14dBalas GOD_KING_AQUA
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01 NIGHTMARE MOTIVATION. - _Avatar0FFury_14dBalas Bonb_Crusher
It’s too early for freaky hours, family ! ☝🏽😀
The week felt longer with a broken wrist. Claude couldn't do his usual fitness and training. He had to adjust. He had to ease up— conserve his energy, for what was to come. He even started dreaming about monstrous armored snakes with bladed whips for tails and poisonous iron-chunk swords for teeth. He'd never had to conserve his energy before. - _Avatar0FFury_15dBalas Bop_
The legend 🔥
09 FIGHT KNIGHT - _Avatar0FFury_15dBerkomentar
This chapter felt very teenwolf coded— but in a good way. Adam feels like your run of the mill laid back mc. I’m excited to see what you do with him and the new girl. Based on your synopsis you could draw up some interesting story beats. Thanks for writing, I hope you keep going ✋🙂↕️
Ch 1 The new kid - _Avatar0FFury_15dBerkomentar
Sir/Maam ! We gotta break up the text into paragraphs. It’s far more digestible and allows readers to comment on specific moments which drives up your interraction!
In the small town of Moonstone, where werewolf legends were as common as the latest TikTok trends and mysteries lurked around every corner, another day dawned with its usual blend of excitement and intrigue. Moonstone, with its eerie charm and spooky tales, was the perfect backdrop for adventures both real and imagined.