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Reincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]

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This story is about Ian Louis, a normal young person who had plenty of money on him, as a result of a successful company he raised from scratch. He used his money wisely making it grow and even donated regularly to charities and orphanages, remembering his own past. He had grown up parentless and was lucky enough to fall in love with a girl and ask her hand in marriage. The girl shared the same feelings as him and they even had many similarities, including love for anime, novels, and manga. Sadly for the two of them, they died in an unfortunate accident before they had gotten married. Among the various animes, the two of them had been avid lovers of One piece and always fantasized about what it would be like to live in that world. Now with a twist of fate, that wish would be fulfilled. ..................... {This is a reincarnation story in the world of one piece. the mc will be extremely overpowered, and to a certain extent, this can be considered a wish-fulfilment story.} (I'm told the fun part of my story starts around the 'water seven' arc which is in chapter 18, so please read until then first before judging the story) Also, the mc won't join the straw hats and would have his own crew. so ignore the comments where I had said he will join, as at the time I was still undecided. ..................... For advanced chapters ahead of the release schedule, head out to my Patreon page! -www.patreon.com/CrazyGuest ..................... Discord: https://discord.gg/a2KkGghPDZ ..................... Disclaimer 1: I do not own one piece. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content. Note: The cover photo was drawn by a friend of mine at my request. ..................... This is my second time writing a story and the first time writing fanfiction, and English is not my first language, but if you have any suggestions for me on where to take the story then please leave them in the comments or reviews. This is an AU of one piece. ****(There will be sexual content at some point in the future) so this novel would be only for those [+18]****

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Chapter 1-Prologue: A new beginning

Prologue.

Many people believe in the theory of the multiverse even with no evidence supporting such a claim. And while many others disagree with them, even going so far to say that any person who believes in that theory is stupid, they couldn't be any more wrong.

There indeed exist many worlds from multiple different universes out there. With the earth being one of them. And it being the sole planet with living beings from its home universe as such making it extremely weak if compared with other worlds.

A person can never leave his universe, some even find it hard to leave their planets much less the universe. And even in the off chance that some being originating from a high tier planet can break the boundaries, he would step into the void separating the universes and die.

Of course, such a thing would never happen, as the universe itself will send the being to the Spíti universe -The very first universe in existence and also the strongest- where there are higher beings who will propose for him/her to join them.

Even for such beings, to travel through the void easily, there exists no way.

But there exists an exception to travel through the void. Being strong enough to withstand the pressure trying to tear every cell of your entire being apart.

Very few can do so, among them there is the oldest and also the strongest being that currently exists. It being called by the rest as o sofós'the wise.

It has no home but the void. It roams the space as if in search of something, for millions of years, often presented a question by higher beings from the Spíti universe when they are looking for ancient knowledge. As such, how it got its name.

In this particular time, o sofós'the wise who is in the shape of a blue gaseous cloud could be seen in the absolutely black void floating meaninglessly and leisurely. Occasionally, it passed by many dark grey clouds that are much bigger than it, each representing a universe.

It knows that the grey clouds surround the universe as a sort of protection against the void, while underneath it lies what it always was and still is amazed to see, the truly marvelous view of a universe.

On its journey this time. When it had reached a small universe apparent by the cloud size, it stopped and curiously stared at a bright sphere of light near it.

With its immense knowledge, it knew that it was a soul. But even in its near-infinite wisdom, it was perplexed as to how a soul can survive in the void very much like itself. It neared it with a curious thought and reached with its powers to see what makes it unique. Once near, it first identified it as an anthropoeidís race, and with a probe on its mind, knew it to be a male from a species called humans.

And as it continued reading 'his' mind, it soon knew of his whole life and a planet named earth that it saw was very weak, and only focused on the technology side, and even at that, it didn't reach a very high level like some universes it knew of.

Even after probing for information, the being was still left wondering for its unanswered questions.

But as wise as it is, it could very easily reach a conclusion.

O sofós'the wise knew that the souls all enter into the reincarnation cycle in the very universe they originated from by means it didn't know of, but always wondered about.

As such this lost soul too was perhaps going to enter the cycle but somehow it ended up here in the void.

For the reason why the human soul can survive in the void, it surmised it as a reason attributed to the many good deeds the human male had done while alive resulting in the bright sphere protecting it. As for why it didn't enter the reincarnation cycle it probed the soul further to confirm its guess.

And as it did so it turned out to be quite shocking for it.

It had noticed how this 'Human' was not linked to this universe reincarnation cycle, but rather at a universe it rather knew too well. It was also probably the reason why the soul was stuck here. It had no way to travel through the void safely.

As o sofós'the wise, thought of this, it noticed how the soul, had reacted to its presence and looked at it interestedly. The soul had inched closer to it and the white light surrounding the sphere extended to touch itself and tried to absorb the cloud substance.

With interest in the soul, o sofós did not stop it and let it take how much it wanted to. But as if the soul knew its limit it took only an extremely small amount and separated from the being. A small amount for someone with its strength, however, but not for the rest...

Thinking no more of this strange event, o sofós turned back to its earlier thoughts and considered whether or not to help the soul.

As it already knew of the human male soul being good it decided to take it to its destination.

It did not see such strange happenings all the time after all, and who knows for how long the soul has been in here.

As o sofós'the wise was extremely strong it had no trouble reaching the soul's destined universe easily in a fracture of a second.

The being mused that the human could be said to be in a situation of fortune in misfortune. As while he died young and was trapped in the void, such exposure was guaranteed to make him gain special abilities. Ones he will need where he was going to.

And he had even interacted with o sofós's energy, which can be considered as a blessing for him.

O sofós'the wise watched as the soul entered the universe that it itself used to enter to live a short life of few millennia from time to time.

It was perhaps the most mysterious universe in existence, and the only one named. It was different than others in that its planets were products of imagination. It was not that they were fake, they were very much real. But rather, it was an ever-expanding universe that added planets that were only considered dreams of higher beings and lower beings all the same.

However, to add a world to that expanding universe, you would have to reach it first. something very few were capable of doing.

As such every time o sofós'the wise thought of a new world in its mind, for the simple reason to quell its boredom, it came to check it out in this universe. Named ápeiro'óneiro, or infinite dream in the tongue of the human male soul that he had newly learned.

With a last look at the soul that had by now entered already into the universe reincarnation circle, O sofós continued on its aimless journey through the void once again.

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Above average and entertaining, but not what you may expect and not for me. I have tried picking up this novel twice and have become disinterested twice (read until zou). It is well written for a fanfic without glaring grammer issues and the story takes a unique spin on the one peice world which is not easy given how many fanfics there are for it. However the author chose to wuxia the one peice world which always felt out of place to me. i.e. new power levels like emporer realm and saint realm are totally unnecessary in a world that has a very clearly defined power structure(especially when the author chooses to use both power structures to explain eachother when one is already enough). The other reason i became disinterested is the inconsistency of the mc’s power levels and the mc’s deus ex machina abilities. One chapter he is stronger than vice admirals but weaker than admirals and can barely hold his own. Then a few chapters later he is able to hold back 3 admirals, sengoku, and Garp without and power increase? The same with his abilities, which are just introduced when the author needs them, like healing, mind manipulation, increased gravity, etc, followed by a sentence how he learned that ability long ago but didnt use it because he didnt want to or was unable to yet. He recently told his crew about increasing his abilities through exotic DNA which they should not understand at all. DNA is known as the lineage factor in one peice and is something both new and not known to common people. It is the whole premise for the vinsmoke family arc, but his crew just casually understand this because they need to for the story. Overall, i enjoyed much of this story and many will not be bothered by what i mentioned. But for me the repetative deus ex machina moments for the mc have dulled any tension or interest i had.

INeedRest
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Blur182
Blur182Lv3

Just realize I did not put a review for this book, despite it reaching 150+ chapters So in conclusion, Writing Quality-5/5 ooga booga me caveman brain can read very easily. I mean its readable and I never pay attention to grammar in the first place. Story Development-4/5 I am entertain. I mean I can't really say much, the manga isn't even finish yet. Its just really slow right now, which is very understandable as I will explain late on(or maybe to me the chapter feel very short) Character Design-4/5 The author is considerate enough to show image of how the character look. However, some oc are very flat but I dont think this will be permanent. Just like how one piece have arcs for each character for their development, I think this one will be the same. In fact currently, one of the character I consider flat will probably develop due to a factor. Updating Stability-5/5 Its very consistent, and the quality holds up for now. I don't think have preplan as he will sometime ask for our opinion that may or may not influence the story(Which I really love, tho that could be what lead to its possible downfall) Considering how oftern he update, Im really worried cos mate that pressure tho. World Background-5/5 I think this is probably his biggest strength. He stay relatively close to canon(not all the time cause u kno, butterfly) and its really intriguing but not unique. In conclusion, a very good read for me, do note, the only reason I will drop a novel is cos of shit mc, shit plot or shit romance. And for the record, my opinion is shit too.

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