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ChiefBoots
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2020-08-08 01:07

I've been on this site for about 2-3 years I've commented in that time probably 10-15 times cos to me I feel one should an understanding to what they are reading and I just thank for all your hard work in taking this fic to where it's at so again thank you

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CrazyGuest
CrazyGuestAuthor

Thank you :)

Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Lies! The review is 8 months old which is around August 2020. You registered in webnovel in 2019 January . That means it's only been around 1 year and 8 months when you wrote this review!! Don't mind me I'm bored af

Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Oh yeah i finally remembered why I dropped this fic. You decided to make Robin not a virgin when she met MC.

CrazyGuest:Thank you :)
CrazyGuest
CrazyGuestAuthor

I was going to fix that soon lol

Mortifer:Oh yeah i finally remembered why I dropped this fic. You decided to make Robin not a virgin when she met MC.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Why now? That was like a hundred chapters ago.

CrazyGuest:I was going to fix that soon lol
CrazyGuest
CrazyGuestAuthor

Well for me it was okay either way but many people complained so I thought I'll fix it for the newer readers since at any rate, it won't change much about the story, but sadly I just can't find the time.

Mortifer:Why now? That was like a hundred chapters ago.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Well if you plan to, it's in chapter 87. A lot of readers don't like it when a heroine ain't pure.

CrazyGuest:Well for me it was okay either way but many people complained so I thought I'll fix it for the newer readers since at any rate, it won't change much about the story, but sadly I just can't find the time.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Btw, is there any other harem member aside from Robin that isn't a virgin? If yes, will you change those too?

CrazyGuest:Well for me it was okay either way but many people complained so I thought I'll fix it for the newer readers since at any rate, it won't change much about the story, but sadly I just can't find the time.
CrazyGuest
CrazyGuestAuthor

Well no, Elene and Robin are his lovers. Elene lost hers to him so

Mortifer:Btw, is there any other harem member aside from Robin that isn't a virgin? If yes, will you change those too?
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Welp, do tell if when you've fixed it and I'll re read your story again.

CrazyGuest:Well no, Elene and Robin are his lovers. Elene lost hers to him so
CrazyGuest
CrazyGuestAuthor

It was done earlier, so go ahead 😁

Mortifer:Welp, do tell if when you've fixed it and I'll re read your story again.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Nice.

CrazyGuest:It was done earlier, so go ahead 😁
ChiefBoots
ChiefBootsLv5

sorry for replying so late but this is a second account as I lost my last phone and couldn't remember my password so I just made a new account

Mortifer:Lies! The review is 8 months old which is around August 2020. You registered in webnovel in 2019 January . That means it's only been around 1 year and 8 months when you wrote this review!! Don't mind me I'm bored af
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