maelvoid_2025

Thats not it; usually anytime there is comdeic abuse targeted against the male mc, now this would be ok if it was just once or twice. But unfortunately thats not how people use it since they end up making it a common theme in the story where the mc is randomly hit or beat on for no reason. Which with prevalent it is acroos different mediums gets very annoying.

Question how can the original mc use daze/mind control on his classmates when he shouldn't have had acces to them? When currentmc awoke he was fully human in all ways and only experienced the change like a few days after enrolling; which donsnt make sence if the previous mc could do it before. Did the original mc have access to all the current mc's abilites and they were only resealed before mc awkoe in the body?

Can the mc morph himself some clothes ?

Your welcome plus you can always edit the chapter reconning this pathway.

I think these past two chapters could have been done better. Alice already assumes alex saw the future with him being knowledgeable about things he shouldnt be. So it only stands to reason to first tell Alice the hole situation before while their alone as it can strengthen the buding bond between them. Plus this is Alice's past wete talking about so he should have given her the info first and let her decide whether or not the rest of the family needed to know. It also just maakes him look alot more untrustworthy in the cullens eyes seeing as he knows all this and didnt say anything before.

These last few chapters feel hastily put together and not thoughrly flushed or thought out. Its like the author changed his mind on the direction of the story abruptly.

Comedic abuse is not ok and really brings one out the story.

evelyn is ...if im right from the movie of a women crashing her car off a small bridge off into the water before being struck by ldightning while drowning in the cold water thus granting her immortality.

what happened? I was on ch 115 (intro of emma) and now when I comeback to the story ch114 and 115 disappeare.