The author put his own twist on one piece. The MC isn’t a little *****, OP as hell and the story is quite intriguing. Can’t wait to see how it progresses.

Above average and entertaining, but not what you may expect and not for me. I have tried picking up this novel twice and have become disinterested twice (read until zou). It is well written for a fanfic without glaring grammer issues and the story takes a unique spin on the one peice world which is not easy given how many fanfics there are for it. However the author chose to wuxia the one peice world which always felt out of place to me. i.e. new power levels like emporer realm and saint realm are totally unnecessary in a world that has a very clearly defined power structure(especially when the author chooses to use both power structures to explain eachother when one is already enough). The other reason i became disinterested is the inconsistency of the mc’s power levels and the mc’s deus ex machina abilities. One chapter he is stronger than vice admirals but weaker than admirals and can barely hold his own. Then a few chapters later he is able to hold back 3 admirals, sengoku, and Garp without and power increase? The same with his abilities, which are just introduced when the author needs them, like healing, mind manipulation, increased gravity, etc, followed by a sentence how he learned that ability long ago but didnt use it because he didnt want to or was unable to yet. He recently told his crew about increasing his abilities through exotic DNA which they should not understand at all. DNA is known as the lineage factor in one peice and is something both new and not known to common people. It is the whole premise for the vinsmoke family arc, but his crew just casually understand this because they need to for the story. Overall, i enjoyed much of this story and many will not be bothered by what i mentioned. But for me the repetative deus ex machina moments for the mc have dulled any tension or interest i had.

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It was definitely enjoyable and I wish to see how you are gonna explain the mysteries of Oda-sama. Keep it up, Author-san! it's a five star for you!

An incredible work at the war arc. I applaud you author. for any new readers, this is a gem. An op mc, an interesting plot, the mc is not a wuss, it has a harem of two girls so far as supplied by the author. And so far all the characters that weren't shown in the anime enough were shown here, especially in the war arc. some attacks made by the author for those people like Garp or Kizaru were really cool.

Just Binge the whole story just 2 days and didnt sleep properly and gotta admit.. IT'S WORTH IT! How the Hell is this not in the TOP 10. This story is on PAR ( in my opinion) with the Legend himself ; Einlion-samas Endless Path story.. Author really thank you for the wonderful Journey/Adventure that you created and share it to the mass. Wish you well in this times and be safe healthy always. Ps: Are you married? Are both Ian and Elene you and your wife in the story? Sorry just askin. Just had the vibe/feeling that i felt in the story that it's you and your Wife :v .. Well i might be wrong buuuut just asking :3

the author made a good job in this novel. he added his own twist on the one-piece world, with his mc still being OP. The mc's crew are good enough, and I especially like the fact you saved whitebeard and how the entire war arc was changed. love your work keep it up.

One of the best one piece fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The writing quality and update stability is not bad. The World background doesn't fit into One Piece (Japanese Manga) with sudden threats of World Destruction through some kind of demons called "Diávoloí" (sounds Spanish or italian" which is bad naming. And abilities that don't fit into one piece. Random new abilities like suddenly gravity control, healing and mind powers is also bad character design. His strength level is also inconsistent. He is stronger than most vice Admirals but weaker than the admirals. Few chapter later without training or a power boost he is stronger than the admirals. Another few chapter later still without any power boost stronger than whitebeard or at least his level...