I had to pull away A LOT OF points because of the lack of updates, which dear author, is apparently what you are known. To be honest, I have just started reading and am just bewildered by the how the MC reacted, which is why I am gonna drop this.
Currently stopped at ch 11, because:
- Mc just revealed his system for apparently no reason to all leaflings? And not just that, before he did something similar, where I ask myself, couldn't the mc explain like "I have been enlightened" and the low brainer leaflings would just accept that?
- 'Ghost' has been INCREDIBLY annoying already. Let me ask you, how did you make a fkin leaflin 'female', when you didn't even explain how leaflings reproduced? You simply skipped (maybe explained later)? Anyways, that fkin 'female' leafling named ghost is incredibly annoying, ion even get how mc neglected all his training 2days after his death?? She is behaving so rudely towards him, and he just accepts it like it's nothing.
- The nickname 'captain', why? Seriously, why? He is not a captain, even teacher would be bad, how did you come to just take captain cuz he was a captain in his previous life? Just keep fkin lightened one, ion even get why you dropped it, he was literally the only one being called like that...
- His pride. He was a team leader of a fkin special 'ghost' unit, working for 23(?) years, but he apparently got NO pride at all? How can he let someone he doesn't know call him fkin luci, like seriously, LUCI.
- Lastly, his background. What did he do? Where is he from? Why did he do what he did? Who did he have a relation with? You, author, literally skipped ALL essentials to character building in the first 11ch. I don't care if you did it later on, cuz you already lost me and surely many others, because we just see the mc being totured, reincarnated and then taking life aloof and relaxed AS IF NOTHING EVER HAPPENED.
I don't expect a large drama session or anything, but seriously, LUCI? He reincarnates after being totured, and then just takes it when someone steps on him, stomps him, disrespects him, acts rudely AND calls him fkin LUCI? Dude, that's not a special arms team leader, that's just a random person with some kinda yandere liking?????????????
Really gotta drop this, esp seeing that the updates are like maybe once a month? Atp with active updates JUST ONCE a day, there would've been AT LEAST 400 chapters. Not worth a read, thanks a lot for the try.