good read, and what i hope to read in the system novel, not some wish fulfillment or weak system just to torture MC... the foundation is good i will wait until mc become rank 7 to continue reading.. meanwhile i will give 2 power stone everyday..

after reading till the latest chapter i can say for sure that this is worth the read once you reach chapter 120 were things are finally starting to get fire the grammar is good haven't seen any errors and everything can be understood the world building is good can't get enought and would love to read more if i could travel throught time to when the novel is done so i could binge read it

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It's a good read. A Plant MC is unique, and kingdom-building is the cherry on top. It's still too early to say anything about the storyline , but so far it's good. I'm not sure if the author intended it this way, but I hope the system gives MC some options, such as in the skill tree and shop. Also, provide some evolution options, like different types of tree monsters. Also, please explain the significance of level up and "leafling" level up. If possible, describe his new evolved form(s). That's it for my suggestion.

It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, so I won't lie and say it's the best novel on this site. Give it a read, if you aren't interested in the first ten chapters then you probably won't fully immerse. However, I must say it was worthwhile writing this, so I'm sure it's going to be worthwhile for some of you to read this as well. Review: World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver. Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there. Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken, Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension. Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here. Happy reading.

I just wanna add that don't, in the name of the World Tree, don't ever turn him into a human. You can give him humaniod properties and everything, but if MC suddenly becomes human later on, the story loses its uniqueness. And it's like every other system novel.

This novel can be summarized in one word: 'boring'. People might think that being a leafling, constantly evolving and slowly getting stronger is fun. Even I thought so at first and I admired the idea and the way the author wrote it, but as it progressed I realized that I didn't enjoy what I was reading at all. To me, this novel is just a copy of slime anime, the reincarnated slime Rimuru, except that Mc goes around training soldiers and playing sergeant. The difference is that he always trains leaflings with low IQ and shares the advantages and knowledge of his system with them. Other than that, it is a similar kingdom building novel. I don't know why it was fun for some people to see him training his little army down to the smallest detail, but for me it was not worth reading. In the same way, it is pointless to try to make another leafling as strong as him in every evolution. These are creatures at the bottom of the power ladder of the world background. You might think that the only advantage of training them would be long term loyalty but that is a big NO. As a former soldier or agent, Mc is too soft on them. In one chapter a leafling was kicking him in the face and he was just indifferent. At least if you are building your own army you have to make them fear and respect for you. It doesn't have to be all of them always like "Yes, Sir!" to you but what's the point if you don't want to keep them under your power and make them follow your orders? To me it was a boring MC. It's too early to talk about world building as the pace of the story is slow. But he and his 'cheat' are completely pointless. If at the end of the story a leafling who starts from the same level as him - from the bottom - will be at the same power level as him and be disrespectful to him, why should I read this sergeant role play novel ?

This is so awesome. I will wait for until 100 chapters to truly enjoy binge reading this😋 Here’s my hiraishin.😜. . . . . . . . . . There’s nothing here.

I wonder when this is actually going to hit the 11ch/wk. it's a good story, just has horrible update speed

Okay, I've written about 145 chapters as of writing this, and it's time I update my initial review. Firstly Writing Quality: Once again, I'm not native, but I feel I've done a decent job. The grammar isn't superb, but its readable, to the point where people can still enjoy reading. Stability of Updates: Ooof, well my update stability has been horrible for the past few weeks due to other projects. But I'm back on track. Hopefully you guys see my new novel come up on your recommends. Story Development: I've taken a slow pace approach at writing, and its paying off. There's a sense of gratification in the later chapters, seeing all everything coming together. I'm also proud of the plotlines I've implemented. If you follow along, you can see there is an overarching plot, and small scale plots. Things become very exciting past chapter 120. Character Design: Suprisingly, I'm more impressed with the side character then the main character. Not to say that the main character is bad, he's just somewhat inconsistent at times, as I sometimes forget what his background used to be. But all his mishaps can be explained, though to be honest, it mostly because I'm still an amateur. As for mt favourite character? Conspiracist leafling. World Background: 6/5 I'm very proud of the world I've built. Quite unique, type of stuff you can't read anywhere else. The only race you will know of are the humans, and maybe Fae, apart from that, you're in for a treat.