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iwantasystem
iwantasystemLv122yr
2022-08-15 22:59

It's a good read. A Plant MC is unique, and kingdom-building is the cherry on top. It's still too early to say anything about the storyline , but so far it's good. I'm not sure if the author intended it this way, but I hope the system gives MC some options, such as in the skill tree and shop. Also, provide some evolution options, like different types of tree monsters. Also, please explain the significance of level up and "leafling" level up. If possible, describe his new evolved form(s). That's it for my suggestion.

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Kurai_Takahashi
Kurai_TakahashiAuthor

Thank you for the review :) As for your concerns, all will come in due time. As you said, it is still early, and though explaining the system would be cool, from experience I find that doing this too early on makes the story somewhat less interesting. But don't worry, when the time comes for a focus on a particular aspect of the system, you can bet that there will be an explanation somewhere close by. Also I will work to better describe his evolutions.

LOF
LOFLv14

I didn't read, i'm about to. But please don't add a shop, this is the worst addition to systems ever.

Kurai_Takahashi:Thank you for the review :) As for your concerns, all will come in due time. As you said, it is still early, and though explaining the system would be cool, from experience I find that doing this too early on makes the story somewhat less interesting. But don't worry, when the time comes for a focus on a particular aspect of the system, you can bet that there will be an explanation somewhere close by. Also I will work to better describe his evolutions.
Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

harem?

Kurai_Takahashi:Thank you for the review :) As for your concerns, all will come in due time. As you said, it is still early, and though explaining the system would be cool, from experience I find that doing this too early on makes the story somewhat less interesting. But don't worry, when the time comes for a focus on a particular aspect of the system, you can bet that there will be an explanation somewhere close by. Also I will work to better describe his evolutions.
ImmortalFantasy
ImmortalFantasyLv4

Nah fam. it ruins it

Maedreas:harem?
Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15

Ok but does it have it?

ImmortalFantasy:Nah fam. it ruins it
Reborn_Killer
Reborn_KillerLv3

How do i down vote ⬇️

Absolute_Qlipoth
Absolute_QlipothLv4

Sauce of that gif

Absolute_Qlipoth
Absolute_QlipothLv4

you can't that option only appears in topics

Reborn_Killer:How do i down vote ⬇️
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Kurai_Takahashi
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Lol1san
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This novel can be summarized in one word: 'boring'. People might think that being a leafling, constantly evolving and slowly getting stronger is fun. Even I thought so at first and I admired the idea and the way the author wrote it, but as it progressed I realized that I didn't enjoy what I was reading at all. To me, this novel is just a copy of slime anime, the reincarnated slime Rimuru, except that Mc goes around training soldiers and playing sergeant. The difference is that he always trains leaflings with low IQ and shares the advantages and knowledge of his system with them. Other than that, it is a similar kingdom building novel. I don't know why it was fun for some people to see him training his little army down to the smallest detail, but for me it was not worth reading. In the same way, it is pointless to try to make another leafling as strong as him in every evolution. These are creatures at the bottom of the power ladder of the world background. You might think that the only advantage of training them would be long term loyalty but that is a big NO. As a former soldier or agent, Mc is too soft on them. In one chapter a leafling was kicking him in the face and he was just indifferent. At least if you are building your own army you have to make them fear and respect for you. It doesn't have to be all of them always like "Yes, Sir!" to you but what's the point if you don't want to keep them under your power and make them follow your orders? To me it was a boring MC. It's too early to talk about world building as the pace of the story is slow. But he and his 'cheat' are completely pointless. If at the end of the story a leafling who starts from the same level as him - from the bottom - will be at the same power level as him and be disrespectful to him, why should I read this sergeant role play novel ?

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