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2023-07-30 06:12

After reading the book I just couldn't help but write a review. Author, this book is AMAZING. I can't express how much I enjoy it. From characterization to the story line, you have done amazing on the story. And to top it all off, chapters 205-208 are amazing, I cried, and I do mean I CRIED. I truly hope that you will continue this book until it has passed 1,000 chapters

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