1. Writing- Good and still improving.
2. i. Please no harem,
ii. Leave Mikasa for Eren, make a good ending, not like the original.
3. It's good but i hope MC become *MASTER OF ALL*
Archetype:Master of All
ALL INCARNATIONS OF THE AVATAR (AVATAR: THE LAST AIRBENDER) CAN BEND ALL FOUR ELEMENTS, AND LEARN MORE ESOTERIC SKILLS LIKE HEALING AND METALBENDING.
THE ARCHETYPE OF: The ace/master of all.
The power to embody the "master of all" archetype. Advanced/Ultimate version of All-Rounder and Jack-of-All-Stats.
Also Called:
• The Ace
Properties: The user is the "master of all", excelling at virtually everything to the extent that specialists are virtually redundant. They can pick up new skills with ease and intuitively understand whatever they need to. Unlike its lower versions, this archetype is not simply good in all areas or balanced between them, but rather one of the best, if not, the best in all areas.
Powers-
• Ability Transcendence
• Accelerated Development
• Instant Learning
• All-Rounder
• Polymath
• Genius
• Genius Bruiser
• Combat Pragmatist
• Combat Specialism
• Power Specialism
• Lightning Bruiser - Absolute Level
• Powerhouse
• Speedster
• Meta-Learning
• Omni Mode
• Omni-Element Manipulation
• Omnicompetence
• Infinite Experience
• Omni-Intuition
• Omni-Mastery
• Omni Profession
• Optimal Finesse
• Path to Victory
• Path Maker
• Path Killer
• Power Balance
• Reactive Adaptation; in some cases, the user adapts to gain the skills or power needs for any one situation.
• Setup Fighter
• Talent Embodiment
• Tactical Genius
• Training Regimen
Relationships
• All-Rounder
• Child Prodigy
• Polymath
• Power-Skill Combo
4. 3 Chapters per week is good.
5. World- Make the strory cover everything in the world countries - Hizuru (Asia), Acimera, Marley, Mid-East, Eldia (Paradis), Aidini, Ainaeco.