1. Writing- Good and still improving. 2. i. Please no harem, ii. Leave Mikasa for Eren, make a good ending, not like the original. 3. It's good but i hope MC become *MASTER OF ALL* Archetype:Master of All ALL INCARNATIONS OF THE AVATAR (AVATAR: THE LAST AIRBENDER) CAN BEND ALL FOUR ELEMENTS, AND LEARN MORE ESOTERIC SKILLS LIKE HEALING AND METALBENDING. THE ARCHETYPE OF: The ace/master of all. The power to embody the "master of all" archetype. Advanced/Ultimate version of All-Rounder and Jack-of-All-Stats. Also Called: • The Ace Properties: The user is the "master of all", excelling at virtually everything to the extent that specialists are virtually redundant. They can pick up new skills with ease and intuitively understand whatever they need to. Unlike its lower versions, this archetype is not simply good in all areas or balanced between them, but rather one of the best, if not, the best in all areas. Powers- • Ability Transcendence • Accelerated Development • Instant Learning • All-Rounder • Polymath • Genius • Genius Bruiser • Combat Pragmatist • Combat Specialism • Power Specialism • Lightning Bruiser - Absolute Level • Powerhouse • Speedster • Meta-Learning • Omni Mode • Omni-Element Manipulation • Omnicompetence • Infinite Experience • Omni-Intuition • Omni-Mastery • Omni Profession • Optimal Finesse • Path to Victory • Path Maker • Path Killer • Power Balance • Reactive Adaptation; in some cases, the user adapts to gain the skills or power needs for any one situation. • Setup Fighter • Talent Embodiment • Tactical Genius • Training Regimen Relationships • All-Rounder • Child Prodigy • Polymath • Power-Skill Combo 4. 3 Chapters per week is good. 5. World- Make the strory cover everything in the world countries - Hizuru (Asia), Acimera, Marley, Mid-East, Eldia (Paradis), Aidini, Ainaeco.
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LIKEMaster of All POWER/ABILITY: The ace/master of all. The power to embody the "master of all" archetype. Ultimate version of All-Rounder and Jack-of-All-Stats. Also Called: • The Ace Properties: The user is the "master of all", excelling at virtually everything to the extent that specialists are virtually redundant. They can pick up new skills with ease and intuitively understand whatever they need to. Unlike its lower versions, this archetype is not simply good in all areas or balanced between them, but rather the best in all areas. Powers- • Ability Transcendence - The ability to trandscend all supernatural power and abilities • Limitation Transcendence - The ability to overcome limitations and weakness • Accelerated Development • Instant Learning • All-Rounder • Polymath • Genius • Genius Bruiser • Combat Pragmatist • Combat Specialism • Power Specialism • Lightning Bruiser - Absolute Level (The user is a lightning bruiser, a type of fighter that combines both sturdiness and strength, with maneuverability. As opposed to mighty glaciers where they sacrifice their maneuverability for more toughness and more strength or fragile speedsters who sacrifice toughness for speed, the lightning bruiser instead keeps all of them. Absolute Level- Those that are of this level category are a force to be reckoned with. Having the four/three of the aforementioned powers on an infinite and godly scale, is what makes them incredibly feared adversaries, or even amazing saviors depending on their morality in question. They can tear the very fabric of reality as well as the very space-time continuum asunder with their boundless strength, can be infinitely fast and agile to evade absolutely any form of attack, be it melee or ranged, and can have limitless toughness that causes them to not be harmed by any sorts of physical harm). • Powerhouse • Speedster • Meta-Learning • Omni Mode • Omni-Element Manipulation • Omnicompetence • Infinite Experience • Omni-Intuition • Omni-Mastery • Omni Profession • Optimal Finesse • Path to Victory • Path Maker • Path Killer • Power Balance • Reactive Adaptation; in some cases, the user adapts to gain the skills or power needs for any one situation. • Setup Fighter • Talent Embodiment • Tactical Genius • Training Regimen • Prodigy • Polymath • Power-Skill Combo
Maybe that’s because the main love interest typically leaves biggest impact on the viewer and thus the viewers who like to read typically relate the MC to themselves and thus would like to see The main love interest get with the MC
StLuciantheGoldwin:It’s cliche asf y’all always try to make mc get with main love interest
no Mikasa is as much annoying as eren sometimes....but i guess people simp for herI don't know what's more annoying people hating female characters or simping fo themeither way this is one of the ships many sane and normal wouldn't ruin.....if you wanted to have Mikasa then let mc be reincarnated as erenMikasa being with other than eren ruins her appeal and character as she did in mangaand no one is nice.... especially eren acting like jerk saved them many times when mc Acts like jerk people hate him because he is toxicand when mc Acts nice he is goody two shoesi geniunely don't wish to hear this from aot fans.....if other fandom says that it would be fineanyway have fun reading it......but I won't read a fanfic if erenxMikasa is broken like anime
AlmightyMAX:Makes no sense pairing her with Eren if they don't have that bond already formed from him saving her because lets admit Eren can act like a real jerk sometimes she only put up with it due to that bond.