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How can you take away Luffy's comrades?! it's not just one piece. it gets too strong too quickly. in the first chapters there is already a sense of inconsistency

I only read the first chapter. and I already want to beat the main character. the villain waits for Rimuru to finish his internal monologue and the way the villain starts explaining to the child how strong he is and fights with the heroes... it's just killing...

I don't understand a little why he decided to desert? After all, in a couple of months the war will end, he will calmly leave there. please explain

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I only read 3 chapters. What kind of rotten reaction do his parents have?! Where are the doubts? questions? skepticism? he didn’t even ask anything or demand proof! And anyway, why did Arthur Weasley come for him? The ministry has a whole department of people doing this! They could not send such a person who is surprised at everything that a “Muggle” does. And in general he has nothing to do with this department.

постоянное повторение предыдущих строк, откровенно говоря, раздражает. в главах они затягивают разговор и постоянно повторяют его, как будто для умственно отсталых. Иногда темы перескакивают друг в друга. The plot seems to be there, the idea is not bad, but why the hell did he want to go to UA school as a spy. Frankly, he seems like a loser, clinging to the chance to come back or be noticed and recognized.

As I wrote earlier, the character grows too quickly in every sense. It's a pity that he trains mentally (spiritually) all the time; There are virtually no scenes where he exercises. I really want to defeat him, for the way he boasts of his strength to his peers, driving them almost to depression with the gap between them. Everything else seems fine. the only thing that's annoying is your character, who in two years became strong as a Kage... at eight years old... damn, that even sounds crazy! 🤯can you hear the author! and why the hell is he pestering eight-year-old Hinata!!! She's 🤬 eight! he is a reincarnated adult in the body of a child... in short... I simply have no words to describe the idiocy of such a character. If I could give him (MS) a rating, I would give it - 0.

To be honest, after this I lose the desire to read further. How old is he now? 9 years old? height 1.77? in the eyes of those around him, he is just a monster, possessing some kind of secret power.

Don't you think he's too strong for an eight year old? it is progressing too quickly. at 10-11 years old the template will be ready. This is already a MONSTER worse than the tailed one.

This lady is kind of frivolous and naive. Why the hell did she think running away from the palace to have fun was a good idea? in a country where they don’t know anyone, don’t understand the language... did they say that she is an official?! so why is she so stupid, and her servants are no better than their masters... why such a high rating! readers, do you have water in your brain?