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He need a deterent for the outside world to not just try and exterminate all Eldian

I did a whole a rewrite of this, it’s called the hyuga in aot, in it I fixed all of my mistakes and plot holes

That why their is a rewrite out right now, this story was made while I was sleep deprived so 90% of it was made when I was not in my right mind, the rewrite is better since I wrote the chapter while I was wide awake

Either that or just look at the pictures that you see when you click on the story…

Fixed

So hum, what part of the story did you like? What part need to be improved and so on?

Did you like at my exact wording, he would start, it says, “you will only receive the Hyuga clan basic….” It did not say he would be restricted that alone, he can always try and learn more, as for why I call life energy, chakra is quite literally just life energy, later on I just start calling it chakra instead of life energy, also him being a hyuga play an important part of the plot, him being unaware of the plot is my way of forcing myself to not be stuck to the canon, for example, I can’t have him randomly going to castle Utgard on the night of the attack why, because he doesn’t even know it exist, I can’t make him go the easy way out because he is unaware of the easy way out, basically I removed my ability to give him a cope out option

Also the heck is At and Ct, I am confused

I am using the path, he can close up or open them up, so for a titan shifter if the path are closed they can’t transform, if open then they can transform, as for everyone that is not Eldian, I will just say for them what he is doing is quite litteraly hitting their pressure points

You do know he can also open Tenketsu point,Ie buff someone, there is nothing stopping him from doing that to a Titan shifter, the reverse is also possible, he can also nerf them