Kangen - Ku Akan Datang

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Keep the story development, Author. It can help you to get some coins to raise the rankings. Keep maintaining the words per chapter so that you can get the total words amount. Shall we get next chapter, please? Thank you

Hope the author can accomplish the story in more than 40K words. To make it more than 40K words, the author can spread the settings or describe them In details. Enlarge the characters of actors for example. By the way, please continue the story, Author. Really curious the end. Thank you.

Nice story. I like the way of author exposes the intrigues among the actors. Some situation on settings which infiltrate the readers lead to imagine how the end will be. The author also clarifies each character of the actors. The imagination on readers' mind is describing what the top of conflict on the story. Good job, Author. Go ahead ...!

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A new style of describing the story, compile the climbing technical to face the hurricane. Really like the Author's way to situate the setting when Prayoga, Rangga and Bisma start facing the tornado. It looks real and live. It helps me a lot to understand how to climb and the tools used in climbing. Go ahead, Author. You are my favorite one.

I like the languages used in this story. There are three languages in which the Author translates them so that the readers whom do not understand can follow. Perhaps the Author want to describe the setting situation according the way of people from where they are, like here. Continuing and finishing the story will be wonderful. [img=faceslap]

Nice story. I wonder how the story will end. Keep your writing spirit high, Author. I always follow the chapters posted since they make me curious about what will nest happen.

It is interesting to find the way of this story's author to describe the climbing. I can feel also the tense of sickness the actor expresses. I can follow the situation. Great story. Keep moving forward, Author!

According to the readers request to continue the story, hereby I post the next chapter. Please welcome the Kangen - Ku Akan Datang Chapter 19. Please submit your review and vote for the chapter. Really appreciate your presence. Thank you.

I am so curious the next situation on the setting of chapter 21st where the female character on this story has to get involved within the conflict. The Author probably puts the setting of the beginning conflict directly on high tension? Since it is directly high, can be good to speed the conflict. On my opinion. Good jod anyway, Author.

It looks the setting of chapter 21st needs repairing, Author. Raise the tension slowly until the plot of tension reaches the top. Still nice anyway but it will become stronger and strict if the actors flows naturally. Keep going, Author. I am awaiting the next. Thank you.

The chapter of 21st is what I await for. The conflict starts. Make the setting horrible and the readers will follow the situation as if it was real, Author.

Excellent! The story goes right to the top of conflict. The chapter full of tension is begun. Great chapter to start the conflict, Author. Go and continue, please ...!

... and the story starts entering the beginning part of conflict. Really enjoy the flow of plot, Author. Step by step involving the whole characters which appear one by one really interesting. I can understand the rhythm of what you want to show up on the story. Go ahead, Author. Finish it slowly. Thank you.

The setting on a wide public place can be confusing if the author does not set the limit of area. Say it the limit of area is the rooms in a building or the functions of building. To make the setting does not spread too wide, from this chapter highlight each rooms used. Even when the plot flows fast, the author will not lose the focus. Go ahead, Author. Good job.

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