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CoupleofLove
CoupleofLoveLv12yr
2022-06-12 12:59

It looks the setting of chapter 21st needs repairing, Author. Raise the tension slowly until the plot of tension reaches the top. Still nice anyway but it will become stronger and strict if the actors flows naturally. Keep going, Author. I am awaiting the next. Thank you.

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Thank you very much.

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