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Keep the story development, Author. It can help you to get some coins to raise the rankings. Keep maintaining the words per chapter so that you can get the total words amount. Shall we get next chapter, please? Thank you

Hope the author can accomplish the story in more than 40K words. To make it more than 40K words, the author can spread the settings or describe them In details. Enlarge the characters of actors for example. By the way, please continue the story, Author. Really curious the end. Thank you.

Nice story. I like the way of author exposes the intrigues among the actors. Some situation on settings which infiltrate the readers lead to imagine how the end will be. The author also clarifies each character of the actors. The imagination on readers' mind is describing what the top of conflict on the story. Good job, Author. Go ahead ...!

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A new style of describing the story, compile the climbing technical to face the hurricane. Really like the Author's way to situate the setting when Prayoga, Rangga and Bisma start facing the tornado. It looks real and live. It helps me a lot to understand how to climb and the tools used in climbing. Go ahead, Author. You are my favorite one.

I like the languages used in this story. There are three languages in which the Author translates them so that the readers whom do not understand can follow. Perhaps the Author want to describe the setting situation according the way of people from where they are, like here. Continuing and finishing the story will be wonderful. [img=faceslap]

Nice story. I wonder how the story will end. Keep your writing spirit high, Author. I always follow the chapters posted since they make me curious about what will nest happen.