Bl4ck_Stallion

The setting on a wide public place can be confusing if the author does not set the limit of area. Say it the limit of area is the rooms in a building or the functions of building. To make the setting does not spread too wide, from this chapter highlight each rooms used. Even when the plot flows fast, the author will not lose the focus. Go ahead, Author. Good job.

Thank you.

Go ahead, Author. Continue the story, please.

I like the languages used in this story. There are three languages in which the Author translates them so that the readers whom do not understand can follow. Perhaps the Author want to describe the setting situation according the way of people from where they are, like here. Continuing and finishing the story will be wonderful. [img=faceslap]