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I don’t want to lose control In rewriting

Penulis: Quentin_ikanu
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Baca novel I don’t want to lose control In rewriting yang ditulis oleh penulis Quentin_ikanu yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. An extraordinary and exceptional boy named Aim, well, it's how most people know him. After the sudden death of his parents, he found himself under the protection of his father's childhood friend, who ...

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An extraordinary and exceptional boy named Aim, well, it's how most people know him. After the sudden death of his parents, he found himself under the protection of his father's childhood friend, who guided him and helped him overcome his difficulties and differences. He meets four weird boys, who in some way are different from him, but each represents something positive that will help set in motion all the efforts his guardian has made to help him overcome his daily trouble. They participated in his fulfillment. And the day he crossed the path of Kenan... He is a young boy with an innate talent for classical dance and drawing, which has turned his life upside down with his physique, feline grace, and intoxicating beauty. His habits and desires have taken a turn that he never thought he could. With his intellectual heritage and enormous fortune, which threatens his life after living in hiding for more than nine years, will he make it or the same fate as his parents await him?

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She met him he met her they fell in love and lived happily ever after. Ha you thought this will be a story about a girl who grew up in an unfriendly world, as she grew older she was losing all hope until one day she was gonna end everything, but then she met him. Bright blue eyes tall super handsome. She doesn’t know who he or in other words what he is but he saved her life and gave her a reason worth living just a little longer. But why she continues to ask herself but then one day she figures it out and figures out why she didn’t just decide to end it all that time ago. They don’t live happily ever after but they do live happily together even though everybody is against it and just wants to get into his pants after they find out actually how rich he is. But then one day something happens to Delilah that crashes Logan's soul. He wants to leave because he is the one who caused what happened to happen she gets mad at him for hitting someone that was so close to her will she forgives him? She wants to say no but she knows he had to do it. They don't live like any normal happily ever after but they still live the way they want to live. Several years later. . . They have 3 kids two boys two girls they are happy and they are going to grow old together they love each other her brother is safe and not sick Delilah is a mother and Logan is a father. Milo is a godfather. Milo found the love of his life and they all lived like there day was the last but in a good way. So, in other words, they lived happily ever after

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The Azure Lotus

"The Azure Lotus" - It is said that this flower blooms once in 10,000 years... Is it really so...? Well, when summarizing the main story of this novel, it comes to mind that greed is born with the intention of gaining power, or the only goal of greed is to gain power. From this, a sense of entitlement full of inferiority is born. The attraction towards each other has been going on for an eternity, and with it, the range of inferiority complexity is gradually increasing. It is said that whenever this arises in someone's heart, it causes destruction everywhere for them. From the influence of which even the kingdom of heaven is not exempted. But it is also true that if there is a disease, there is a way to cure it, and here it is the union of "pure love" and "wisdom." How will our "Goddess of Love Kiyoko" and "God of Wisdom Akimitsu" connect with each other holistically for the welfare of the world, stand against this destructive, all-consuming, negative, anti-life force, and continue the struggle to maintain harmony in the entire world. This is the topic of our Nobel... Disclaimer This is a work of fiction. Unless otherwise indicated, all the names, characters, places, events, and incidents in this book are either the product of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. This fiction does not represent any particular nation, religion, language, coterie, nor oppose it. Here the writer is only trying to follow some realistic material in order to create a realistic plot of the story; they don't claim anything else... And also, as our fiction on the one hand condemns war, conflict, violence, strife, bloodshed, brutality, oppression of the strong over the weak, and adultery. On the other hand, it also supports life, peace, unity, prosperity, cooperation, kindness, compassion, pure love, and wisdom wholeheartedly. So we humbly request all the readers to please enjoy this novel just for the pleasure of reading the story. Finally, this is what I want to say - "Life is a wonderful creation of God, so it should be cherished like a great purpose. It is necessary to prepare its own foundation by combining pure love and wisdom. Peace should be its requirement, and unity should be taken as its strength."

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Guys that’s a great story, I still reading it and I am amazed. So I think it’s time that I leave a review. I recommend it for anyone who love sweet and confuse love story. Aim, Cody and Ewen are great, loll don’t want to spoil the story for you. But believe it worth it

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GJslimboy
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I can explain hoe i feel about this story yet but I know one thing this boy Ken is a character that is very interesting and i love Aim, I really want to be like him psycho or nit. Ahah I will be the master of my life… I love the story it’s eeally good

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This is a good story. However, I noticed an insignificant amount of mistakes on the grammar and punctuation marks. Leaving that aside, the plot and characters are both intriguing. Keep writing, author! <3

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Writing Quality: It was written in a first-person perspective which was my favorite as it creates an intimate (closeness?) to the character. Though what I didn't like about this style of narration is that it can easily become an unreliable narration because everything was filtered through the lens of the said character. (Says the person who's currently writing in first-person.) And although I saw some punctuation and capitalization errors, especially in the first line, I will still give it five stars in hopes that author-san will improve. Stability of Updates: So far so good. Story development: I haven't gone that far yet but it has a good start I would say. Character Design: Cool! The protag was supposed to be very smart but has a very low eq. An interesting trope. I hope it doesn't fall into a cliche category in the future. World Background: As far as I've read, it was set in our world. So I guess that would help me visualize things more easily, I think. [Keep it up, Author! And keep improving.]

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Hey you’re improving a lot. Congratulations that’s really great, keep continue making progress and make this story unbelievable. I kinda like ready every word you put on. Waiting impatiently to the remaining chapter of this interesting story. Hey guys go have a look, you’ll not regret it I promise. I enjoy it so much… Ken is interesting, I am not going to tell you about Aim. Ah ah ah

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