Can't say that I enjoyed this novel as much as I did guild wars, but let's begin the analysis.
1- I feel disconected to this novel mostly because the protagonist's emotions don't make sense. He pratically "owned" the world before his death and transmigation to Faust, I won't say he should be a stuck up prick, but there should be at least some pride hidden in there, he should have some negative emotions towards the Goddes who sent him to this world to entertrain her and the goddes's 'dog' (forgot his name, but the system dude), I mean, I understad that it's useless to be angry at the goddes for her emotions, but there should be some anger hidden behind his demeanor, he's basically a toy for her afterall... (I feel like no ammount of being a cold-hearted MC would make that anger dissapear, hiding it would be possible, but making it inexistent is kinda weird...)
2- The story progression kinda sucks, ngl...
I feel like things go his way too easily, if the goddes really created this world just for him, she could probably make his life harder, instead he goes to speak with a random bandit leader, he has 10 god level treasures, cuz why not (none of them were duds btw, that situation was unreal af...) and to top all that off when he goes to see the slaves there's a dude with Royal giant blood in his veins, won't even say how absurd that is...
3-The world is interesting at least, there's a few continents that have different settings, for some reason the technology advanced continents haven't enslaved the other continents (wich doesn't make sense, since they have a really advanced techonology level, but hey, magic.)
4-No romance during the free chapters (till c70), for those who were reading for the romance tag.
5-I feel like his system limits him a bit too much, but there's probably gonna be some changes in the future, with system upgrades and shit.
6-Transmutation was done in a bad way... (would say shitty, but that might be offensive so, bad).
a) No reason for him not to make better potions... If the supreme version doesn't exist (as the author said in a comment) he could at least go for the highest quality possible, but due to balancing issues we had a protagonist that made a potion just slightly better and didn't give any explanation as to why only went that far. (aka we need more rules for the transmutation skill instead of plotholes)
b)A rule that he can only transmute itens that are considered to be of his level would be nice. Ex: Journeyman can only make potions of medium quality and can only transmute things to idk orichalcum ore. The ownership system is weird af too, but sure.
7)I feel like his first scheme, kinda sucks afterall you don't really need to go for the "light" path in a kindgom said to be small af, he could just focus in creating his party and staying low while controlling the market from behind the scenes, but idk politics might help him in the future. Btw forgot to say that using the first scheme to create a 'identity' was total bullshit, no1 knew ppl from other towns in the medieval age, so it would be very easy to create a better indentity he could have gone with the tycon from a different kindgom identity, we all know that the spy network of a small kindgom won't be able to investigate his background that way.
