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Reincarnated as a cultivation protagonist

Auteur: ShaggyJoestar69
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Synopsis

I was just a normal guy, had a okay childhood, had average grades, got married had kids. Died of lung cancer in my 30's. Now colour me suprised when I chosen to reincarnate like your typical Web novels fanfic character. --------- Slow pace story.

Étiquettes
4 étiquettes
# ADVENTURE
# REINCARNATION
# SYSTEM
# CULTIVATION
Chapter 1Chapter 1: Rebirth(Edited)

"You chose me by random?" I said confused as I sat at a table with cookies and milk. The person infront of me took a cookie and dipped it into his glass of milk before eating it.

"Yes I did. You may refuse if you'd like after all your are being sent to cultivation world." Infront of me sat a man with blond hair and green eyes, they were oddly the most beautiful thing I've ever seen, even more so than any gem. This is man called himself an R.O.B.

"I accept though I wonder will I be getting wishes?" I asked him, he simply nodded and said "You get four wishes. You can think it over for how ever long you want. No skin off my back."

"Alright then, I would like for world peace but make sure the world doesn't stagnate but keep moving on." He looked at and smiled "So you wish for humanity to to achieve world peace while keeping on advances. Normally humanity only advances in war and conflict, but I've seen timelines where this has happened so your good."

I smiled, I'm glad my family is going to be able to live in peace. "For my next wish want a system, that could record my abilites and I would also want it to have a Gacha and shop function."

"Done now Next wish." I know this is cliche but I really want this. "I want the sharingan, can you make it get stronger as I cultivate. I know it's cliche, but I want those magic eyes. I also don't want go murder any allies I make just to gain the Mangekyo and go blind using it. And can you make so it eventually evolves into the Rinnegan."

"Sure but-" Did I ask for too much? "The Rinnegan is going to take your final wish." I'm okay with that it's better than nothing. "Anyway good luck and enjoy your adventure."

- Elsewhere -

In the Han mountain ranges was a small city which was located in the Raging Wind Empire on the Black Turtle continent. This city was named Soothing River city. This is where our protagonist is currently being transmigrated.

On of the dusty streets you could see a teenage boy sleeping on the cold ground he looked to be 15 in age. They were visible wounds on his face and his clothes were also torn apart. Said boy got up and held his head as he winced in pain.

"What the hell!" said our protagonist as another migraine hit his head and a set of memories came flying in his head like shooting star.

'So my name Len Hai, I'm apart of the Len Clan and one of the sons of the Patriarch in the Len Clan. My mother is name Len Si, she died of sorrow when I was at the age of ten, she heard I had Crippled Martial Veins. That and my father was an abusive asshole, who only thinks with his dick, he'd have multiple affairs, even before before I was born."

Martial Veins like the the profound veins in against the gods are needed to cultivate martial energy, in this world those who are weak get stepped on. Might is right, typical cultivation world. And it seems I'm being bullied continuously and my father does nothing about it.

[Ding System Installed]

So it's installed, I might as well return to my place, I don't want encounter any strong martial beasts. I got up and walked toward my little hut some ways away from the clan grounds. They shifted me way back in the wilderness, it's a good thing only weak martial beast are here due to the young masters hunting them off.

I safely made it to my hut on a stony path, the roof had multiple holes in it, to they which were multiple pans under them which I used to bathe. I sat down on the dried leaves I use for my bed.

"Alright system are you sapient?" I asked but whispered I don't want anyone paying by thinking I'm crazy.

[Yes I am host!]

"Good show me my status."

[Status]

Name: Len Hai

Age: 15

Bloodline: Sharingan(Locked)

Body Strength: None

Cultivation Level: None

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Skills:

Cooking-(4/100) | Sweeping-(3/100) | Farming-(4/100)

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Skills points:5 / Shop points:50

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'System can I speak to you like this in my mind?' I asked the system which replied with. [Yes host it possible.] 'Good. Do I have some kind of gift pack?' [Yes.]

[You received 6 Gacha stars] Five star like trinquet fell into my hands from nowhere. [Break them in the palm of your hand.] I did so and I got.

[Common Grade Martial Sword

15 skill points

Surfing Cloud Steps

Random/Uncommon body tempering art

1,200 silver lien

Martial Vein]

1,200 lien that's a fuck ton of money! That's even more than the annual family budget which is only about 4 to 500 hundred silver Lien. Lien goes from Bronze, Silver and Gold. It seems I have some good luck.

'System can I have my Martial Veins now?' The system replied with [Yes host however be warned the process will be incredibly painful.] I immediately replied with a yes.

And my skin began to crawl, it as if worms were moving underneath, I've never been assaulted with such pain before. Even when I broke my arm when I was a kid this felt worse, there were no comparisons between the two.

"AAAAAGGGGHHHH!!!!" I screamed out loud as I collapsed to the floor.

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Table des matières
Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :Set Up
Volume 2 :I'm on the move!
Volume 3 :A end to an old journey a beginning to a new one.

audimat

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  • Qualité de l’écriture
  • Mise à jour de la stabilité
  • Développement de l’histoire
  • Conception des personnages
  • Contexte mondial
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ThePath
ThePathLv1

Started good and funny but devolved to a cheap and badly written Xianxia knock-off. In the first chapters of the story I thought it would be a good "Crackfic" which is fun and making of the Xianxia trope mixed with an absurdly overpowered system. This however quickly dissolved and the MC just became a wanderer type alchemist following all the cliches this trope has to offer, I honestly think the creativity of the author died. The whole thing needs a re-write, the start although creative and funny doesn't flow correctly and is not well written, author the book "Story Genius: How to Use Brain Science to Go Beyond Outlining and Write a Riveting Novel" is a good one on the subject. I would like to see more western comical elements, you gave him the memories of the one and only Rick Sanchez, that is completely absurd and could've made this whole work funnier if you employed some of his crazy characteristics, although memories does not equal personality and thinking patterns they should have had a gigantic change to the MC. The MC should've embraced more of Ricks mad scientist instead of nihilistic genius (since he got young ricks memories), so stuff like him releasing T-Virus equivalents to power up non-cultivators and other wacky stuff that would've made the whole plot more engaging. An over-arching plot-point would be nice, for example MC is in one of the lower realms that exist and in the end we find that the one who is managing/created the realms did so he can sacrifice the souls of people living there for power. However our MC does not care about that. Anyway, in conclusion your novel sparked my imagination but failed to deliver, a good fan-fiction that did something similar would be "You are Courting Death" but that one didn't have a crazy scientist. Overall if you re-write this I know you can do a lot better

2yr

UhVise_Necro
UhVise_NecroLv10

It looks really good. but i hope he doesnt become too obsessed with strength or too scared of powerful hidden experts to actually live a little and enjoy his new life. Ive seen a lot of fics do that and its not very enjoyable.

3yr
LoverOfGula
LoverOfGulaLv2

is the mc interested in women? what i mean is if he'll pursue a woman if he likes them or if he'll never go after any woman. whether its harem or not doesn't matter if he gets in cliche sexual situations yet ignores every woman he sees.

3yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

This is a "With a SYSTEM" story only more cringe because it is for cultivation. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. .................

3yr
DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv4

Painfully stupid. From the very start with his dumb wishes and dumb talk with a ROB that judges rinnegan worth 2 wishes and the system costs 1, don't know what else to say, it is just dumb xianxia of mediocre level even in its own league.

2yr
Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

it needs editing.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

3yr
fantacia_000
fantacia_000Lv4

i do like this novel . but I do dislike the mc in the later chapters . it is like at first mc was smart and a bit calculative as he was living in constant danger . he was also diligent in his cultivation as he got past multiple realms easily , but in later chapters his cultivation diligence is seem decreasing . iam not badmouthing or anything it feels like he is in same realm several months . and mc also become overly emotional and and self blamer . it is like I lost the image of my mc I had in my mind from the start . mc also forgot the dangers of cultivation worlds as he severely underestimate people as uncivilized people . although i dislike mc the story of novel is good and i hope the mc come back to his usual style .

3yr
MachinaOnTheMoon
MachinaOnTheMoonLv3

It has a good chunk of flaws but some good parts. I mean the flaws kinda out weigh the pros by a bit so that why my rating is so low. Sorry author guy

3yr
DaoistElxnbZ
DaoistElxnbZLv1

This story has been abandoned or is on hiatus, I really enjoyed reading it.......................................................................................................

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Sinnermann
SinnermannLv3

There is great flow in the story, the writing is updog , .....................................................................................................

2yr
Lionn_
Lionn_Lv1

Mc is Gay! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
wolu918
wolu918Lv3

the story base is extremely good, but the the mc is too hipocrite , . And is too weak hearted, also unable to stand on one decesion. Also naive .

3yr
Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

MC is OP. Also he's not a pushover(so far atleast). MC's cool headed, doesn't goof around wasting his potential, currently on chapter 41, so far no love interest. It's enjoyable so far. Read at your own discretion and judge.

3yr
lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv3

A Cultivation fanfics that is not ATG, TDG, Soul land and BTTH huh? i will give it 5 stars lol....................................................................................................................

3yr
EijiSeishuu
EijiSeishuuLv11

this mc protag xiaxia or xuanhuan?? ...............................................................................................................................

3yr
Patrick_hell123
Patrick_hell123Lv15

I like your story it's very interesting to listen to

1yr
Reykun
ReykunLv13

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

2yr
Ibrahim_NiR
Ibrahim_NiRLv13

Eres grande amigo, es una de las historias sobre cultivo más ligeras y emocionantes para leer de un solo golpe jajaja... Necesito más de esta novela

2yr
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

You can understand that mc is stupid from the first episode. In the next episodes, he still hasn't changed his mentality, I'm a good person, I help innocent people, I don't loot, I don't do bad things for power, I take care of the child of the animal I killed. He is a complete brain disabled. If there is no system in this world, 1 week can't even survive.

2yr
ChiicHiimenon
ChiicHiimenonLv1

I really don't like how he wasted his wishes and really don't like Naruto elements in cultivation world so I always drop them because it really doesn't match my taste and the system 🤮🤮🤮🤮

2yr

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