It looks really good. but i hope he doesnt become too obsessed with strength or too scared of powerful hidden experts to actually live a little and enjoy his new life. Ive seen a lot of fics do that and its not very enjoyable.

is the mc interested in women? what i mean is if he'll pursue a woman if he likes them or if he'll never go after any woman. whether its harem or not doesn't matter if he gets in cliche sexual situations yet ignores every woman he sees.

This is a "With a SYSTEM" story only more cringe because it is for cultivation. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. ................. .................

Painfully stupid. From the very start with his dumb wishes and dumb talk with a ROB that judges rinnegan worth 2 wishes and the system costs 1, don't know what else to say, it is just dumb xianxia of mediocre level even in its own league.

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i do like this novel . but I do dislike the mc in the later chapters . it is like at first mc was smart and a bit calculative as he was living in constant danger . he was also diligent in his cultivation as he got past multiple realms easily , but in later chapters his cultivation diligence is seem decreasing . iam not badmouthing or anything it feels like he is in same realm several months . and mc also become overly emotional and and self blamer . it is like I lost the image of my mc I had in my mind from the start . mc also forgot the dangers of cultivation worlds as he severely underestimate people as uncivilized people . although i dislike mc the story of novel is good and i hope the mc come back to his usual style .

It has a good chunk of flaws but some good parts. I mean the flaws kinda out weigh the pros by a bit so that why my rating is so low. Sorry author guy

This story has been abandoned or is on hiatus, I really enjoyed reading it.......................................................................................................

There is great flow in the story, the writing is updog , .....................................................................................................