Parallel Memory

Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. This novel includes what I would in a novel where MC has the memory of this Earth. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

a very good novel and an interesting plot keep it up bro don't stop and update regularly I am super sure that this novel has a lot of potential keep up the good work

I'll keep it short, after going through 40 chapters, I still no nothing about our Mc, not in the sense of his family and friends, but why he thinks how he thinks, why does his morals A B C, why is this his train of thought, who is he really, and this is problematic because then it has no essence, the mc has no character. This novel can still be saved however, but before you can build the world, I suggest you a singular person, our main character, for if the lens are dull, then the picture will so as well.

I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work 👍

I would rate this story higher but there are a couple problems. The writing quality is a bit bad and would improve A lot by only putting it through a grammer checker. Another major problem is that it is almost a carbon copy of the Authers POV with some differences. It currently only has 30 chapters but i hope as the story goes on you make it more unique.

Quite creative immitation of Author's POV. Though it's just too much of a copy, all the series of events that occur in the novel are put in here with just slight modifications. I hope author can put his own plot instead of just copy pasting and replacing terms...

the story is good but where are you author😭😭

i can barely get past the cringe of the story but then u introduce Eleonore and yup can't bear it anymore she is just to dilusional. and that is the limit of cringe i can bear... plz tell me if we have to see her more in later chapter otherwise I'm out. if you are making a blatant copy of Author pov atleast make it good

❤️Dear Auther~ its my first/ and fav novel.... but its been 2/3 weeks without update still i m waiting patiently plz update soon/when ur free🤧 i am missing zero n hero 😟 .... stay healthy and safe~ giving u blessings from my home~

I have read it up to 400 chapters and it is very good story🤩

One of the best novel I have ever read addicted to this story 😁

Nice read. Please keep up the good work👍

the dialogue are all cringe, even after 324 chapter there is no specific love intrest or don't know if this a harem( its all confusing). in terms of character development there is minimum development after the starting. there is no sense of satisfaction in his achievements which are aren't even that great considering he has the knowledge of future. the whole plot seems to go down after chapter 170 ish, where he again become a side character. yes so I will describe this novel as cringe, great half story, disaster after that, annoying etc

hey author why do you don't come to discord and talk. and why didn't you update in these past few months. if you want a break or want to drop it just tell us beforehand. this is why I gave 1 star on updating stability and I want to ask when you start updating daily?? (and please answer I'm sick of waiting those past months😩)

CRITICAL REVIEW For a person not having English as their 1st language, the writing is legible and can be understood. As long as you can enjoy the story, it doesn't matter. The biggest thing that holds this novel back is originality. No matter what. I cannot keep myself from comparing this to Author's POV. There are too many things similar and the novel doesn't try to be different enough to make the initial premise acceptable. That's really bad because it makes this not only appear like a cheap carbon copy but also make the novel look trash. A similar series who was also inspired by Entrail_J and "The Novels' Extra" ---"The Extra's Survival", does much better in this regard, and I was able to quickly differentiate it as its own story. Here are only SOME things I found similar. Hero hates demon Hero forced to use System ability in dire straits making him go super saiyan. Earl demon classification. Blood supremacy advocate teacher. Finding OP technique before academy - Acceptable but done very poorly. MC's teacher looking like she's giving special treatment to MC. Also similar to Donna (Teacher in Author POV) Devil contractors - Acceptable Hero's arrogant rival obsessed with x heroine Character rankings are similar. Classifications- Acceptable... What I dislike the most would the MC tech nonsense. If apps exist in the world, then why do such significant tech programs and services do not exist already? Creative content is not much is said to be mentioned? But we weren't given any world building to know this. Also what is the level of the world's technology? There's clearly phones and apps.... The company stuff is poorly executed and very rushed. Continuing on, he seems to have god-like knowledge of technology because of his SS ability. But from what the story is shown it doesn't really SEEM like it could do that. Are his memories of his alternative self so vivid and powerful that he can replicate such skills? Clearly not- Example: author talks how that computer science mc self is "far better" in maths than the current mc which is required for coding, business etc. Heck, it said early that he seemed to grasp alot of knowledge of the main plot from another world, but I barely see him preparing for the next current events of a supposed plot of a novel. Yes the storyline is messed up, but what about the big things that are coming. All we see is him training and cough business. Even if you can argue x things happen, there's clearly no planning involved. So there must be something good about the novel right? I mean its still enjoyable but when forced to compare with Author's POV... smh. Sadly, I really can't think of anything that made this novel be Unique. I did quite like the mc attempt be a crazy guy in love to follow what he did in another world in an attempt to follow the plot another world though. Ofc that wouldn't live long. Despite my harshness, I hope this author can do their best to make the story branch away from its inspiration. I ship Sylvia and the MC! The teacher route with the age difference is quite awkward. You could try playing around with the playboy drama to make things interesting. First Lisa, then Mia, then Sylvia! Who would win in the end?!

The novel was actually good...keep it up Author, the only problem is the updating stability.. it's slow. Does author have a sickness or something? but its pretty good... others only rate this novel low because they left to early..

great novel. just hasn't been uploading.

I like this novel a lot but the writing is so horrible thiers so much useless chapter and dialogue that serve nothing at all like the main character sister and her interesting in Zero this one was the worst because it never pay off zero could meet her and save her when he appeared leather but she wasn’t there at all she just finishe they even make the main character and his team beyond stupid in this chapter , like running using Mana then unleashing all of what left at start of the fight so zero could shine, they will never do that it’s impossible not a kid will do what you froce them to do Mr.author, Not only that you cloud solve zero issue when he was seduceing the goddess you cloud say he had change in personality dud to him using dangers skill at forst ark or because he his personality disorder ect, that will solve has problems with her and allow him to get near the main character but you didn’t it’s easy issue with simple souliton why you make it look like an impossible tesk ? 400 chapters 40% of them were irrelevant to the story and served nothing but wast of time even the other 60% chapter had some useless And unnecessary dialogue i hope it will get better but deep down i know that you will continue in the some rythm unfortunately...

Once again it is another rip off of other similar storys, author just changes names of things or elements people use, it ends up feeling very forced as when the author tries to make something unique it conflicts with what has been copied. also another case of where it seems like the original novel would be a better read. If you haven't read these types of novels then it might be worth but this novel is really just a copy of others and if you have read similar before it isn't worth it. same MC trying to stick to plot. MC being weak originally then when he gets strong he still hides power. would do cringe stuff just to follow plot. same sort of everyone's focus on og mc even though cleary shown current mc did more. all in all just re read novels extra or authors pov and it will be more enjoyable. here's to waiting for one of the novel transmigration storys to be unique again

This horrible 30 chapters in and I just can't stand the mc he is stupid and foolish and his personality is everywhere is certain situations. to make up for word count